Reviews for What Makes A Marriage
PananaPotterhead chapter 7 . 7/13
omg I LOVE these
gostephtaylor chapter 7 . 12/24/2019
What a great story about Elsie & Charles
Hope you continue...
evitamockingbird chapter 7 . 7/22/2019
What a lovely birthday celebration! The whole day is a gift. Just like the chapter is a gift. Well done.
evitamockingbird chapter 6 . 7/12/2019
Lovely chapter. I love the teasing between them and Elsie's frank words about what she will tell Beryl when she asks her about *that* aspect of marriage. She kind of owes Beryl one, after all. It's only fair that she give her friend some good advice. Thanks for this.
GeordieLass chapter 7 . 5/22/2019
A lovely update and a very thoughtful gift. Thanks for this x
ozzlover chapter 7 . 5/10/2019
Awwww I love it!
LC aka LC chapter 4 . 4/29/2019
Wonder dialogue. You really have done a great job of capturing them. Love this story.
Milk-and-Hope chapter 7 . 4/14/2019
It is a shame that I didn't review this before, but I dare say you might have an idea about what I want to say :D
Yes. Exactly. Amazing. That's the word I always use to describe your work. Simply because it's true. It IS amazing! So gentle, so very well thought through, a lot of details and as in character as possible. You describe the Charles and Elsie from the show, but you know how to treat them (angry glare to Uncle Julian)
And the idea with the book ... Of course she'd remember such things 3
You portray them so well.
Chelsie on
TgrLady chapter 7 . 4/12/2019
Well you are just the best and giving us a lil Chelsie sweetness! Hehe :) Thanks for the update! My favorite bit would probably Elsie counting her stash of cash with glee! :) Nothing as sweet as the happiness that comes from making someone you love happy! Thanks so much for being awesome, as always!
misszenobell chapter 7 . 4/11/2019
I love how you built up the suspense a bit; reading the first part of this, I wondered what Elsie was planning...And of course, it turned out to be a lovely birthday surprise for her husband. Tom Sawyer was a thoughtful choice and I like that we got a little flashback to the winter when Charles loaned the housekeeper a copy.
I also enjoyed the other sweet Chelsie moments you gave us in this chapter, especially them waking up peacefully together on the morning of his birthday.
Thanks so much - it’s always a joy to read your writing! x
Guest chapter 7 . 4/8/2019
Sweet
I am a chelsie fan
Guest chapter 7 . 4/8/2019
Just lovely. The little vignettes on everyday married life are always fund to read and serve as a good complement to some other stories in which life is a serious of large events. They have been servants their whole lives, so it seems entirely logical that a special gift requires a little extra efforts.
suzie chapter 7 . 4/7/2019
Read it all again, csota. Delightful. As for the book, I suppose Tom Sawyer was not just an American favorite, was it?
Hogwarts Duo chapter 7 . 4/8/2019
My little shipper heart has melted from the love and sweetness of this update. I can easily see Elsie taking in a few little odd jobs like the embroidery to earn some extra money to spoil her love. Swoon. I'm sure their next thirty years are going to be amazing! _
Good Bo chapter 7 . 4/7/2019
This was beautiful, every line written was amazing. Love this xx
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