I think I read your first version of though I don’t remember it, I still like the idea but it seems very rushed especially this chapter I understand it’s the easiest way to Narrow and the others a power boost but they just started the academy and if Narutos skill is reflective of sasuke and satsukis I don’t see why it was needed unless they are going to skip the academy and graduate early even then they are still at least chunnin level I like an OP story I really do but this is to the point where it’s just broken and your the plot of your story doesn’t really make up for it, I am sorry if I am coming of as criticizing you story but you four chapters in and Naruto already has the rinnegan and can use it instinctively. And with how quick Naruto Hinata got together only for satsuki to join like 2 hours later it’s just all to fast. Again I am sorry if you take this review the wrong way but I just think you could have spent more time developing you characters which I do like by the way instead of just flying through it and giving new academy students abilities that are simply broken at their age. I know you aren’t going by cannon but sasuke didn’t even get his sharingan during the massacre and he was alone and under the itachis genjutsu. This just seems a little to unbelievable too me.

its great look forward to next chapter and a new chapter of your naruto\dragonball crossover

I am looking foward to Chapter 5 and I believe Naruto should be given Ryujin Jakka the sword of Yamamato.

great chapter keep up the good work i hope to see more soon

Hmm, seems Naruto has gained the rinnegan wonder what's next anyways keep up the great work!

Cool

I am looking foward to Naruto Konoha's Saiyan, Ch:11 and I think Naruto should train to challenge Beerus the destroyer.

If you really want to make Naruto op and unbeatable you could give him Za Warudo Over Heaven. If you don't know it has the power to overwrite reality and stop time for as long as the user wants to

nice work on this chapter if its better then the old one but keep both I like both of them.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon..

Good story what are the pairings for the story will it be naruhina like your other stories or naruto/hinata/satsuki?

love this novel btw

Interesting story continue soon as possible please

Hahahahahaha good chapter! Nice restart too! Also who is Satsuki?

Hmm, well this should be good though wonder if Satsuki will come to see Naruto as more than just a brother in time anyways keep up the great work!