| Reviews for Wrongs Righted |
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perish-the-thoughtless chapter 4 . 7/10/2018 This was so satisfying! Thank you for sharing, I loved it. |
Guest chapter 4 . 6/27/2018 This was so sweet. It never sat well with me that Dean (through Cas) wiped their memories, therefore leaving them unprotected and vulnerable. This fixes that problem nicely. |
AlxM unsigned chapter 4 . 6/26/2018 Too wild and out there? Not at all. This was a beautiful, brilliant concept and a wonderful gesture. For Sam ro do this for Dean...so warming. Their happiness, when Sam was telling Dean about it and when Dean discovered that it worked, was so lovely to see. Great writing skills as always! Thanks for sharing :D |
dg.sangita chapter 1 . 6/28/2018 Hey just read your fic wrongs righted the next chapter guardian angel. It was beautiful...I wanted to review on the page itself but my app started behaving funny and did not allow me to do so. Hence I am writing the review here. I loved the concept of Sam taking care that Lisa and Ben were safe and of course they meant a lot to Dean like Amelia meant to Sam. I feel so bad for both the boys that they can never settle down with anybody they love. Loved your fic and please keep writing... |
phantomgirl21 chapter 4 . 6/27/2018 this was so beautiful! and I can totally see Sam and Cass doing that! |
shadowhuntingdauntlessdemigod chapter 4 . 6/26/2018 They definitely needed a way to be sure Lisa and Ben were safe after they were left mind-wiped and pretty much open to attack. This is a perfect way to remedy that in some capacity, and Sam and Cas coming together to make it happen made me happy :) |
Jenjoremy chapter 4 . 6/26/2018 Great story. I like the idea of Dean getting some closure with the Lisa/Ben situation. |
phantomgirl21 chapter 3 . 6/26/2018 I loved this so much! I really really hate that we don't see anything like this in the series! we, and Sam, needed this so much! thank you for writing this! |
waitingforAslan chapter 4 . 6/26/2018 What a good choice for a Fix-It fic! Dean was heart-breaking in this episode. After he exorcises the demon and he and Ben are crouched next to Lisa and she moans in pain, the way he says, "I know, honey, I know" is so gentle, especially in contrast with the way he took down the demons guarding the door and the way he had to channel John Winchester to motivate a shell- shocked Ben to get moving. His grief and guilt in the hospital is so hard to watch. Jensen really did an amazing job in that episode. So I definitely liked how you had Sam feeling compassion toward him as well as doing something practical to help protect Lisa and Ben. In this story, you took care of two issues in this episode: 1) Sam's lecture-y response and 2) the danger Lisa and Ben would still be in. I like the adjectives you choose to describe Dean - hardened and hell-worn - as well as the way that contrasts with his Wonder that the Medallion is working. The way he says, "Thanks, Sam" reminded me of when Sam gave him the amulet when they were boys. |
Lucyh95 chapter 4 . 6/26/2018 Yay, another fix-it! This is great! Wish the show had done something like this, because leaving Lisa and Ben unprotected like that was ridiculous. Anything could have gotten to them, they remembered nothing of what had happened. Thank you |
cfccfc chapter 3 . 6/24/2018 I'm enjoying your fix-it fics, and look forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing. |
AlxM chapter 3 . 6/22/2018 She strokes her thumb along his cheek and Sam breathes out and melts into her touch. "My baby. My baby, Sam." she whispers fondly, looking at him like she's gone back in time. THIS PART. This part is so unbelievably touching and so beautifully conveyed and written. Your word choices, the image it all created. It was so touching and moving. The entire story was so far, actually. I loved this. I loved all of it. Thank you so much for sharing! It's always so satisfying and fulfiling to read stories like these that fix the gaps of misunderstanding and unsolved issues between our beloved characters. |
Cammie chapter 1 . 6/18/2018 IM CRYING THAT WAS SO GOOD |
tinkrbell225 chapter 3 . 6/20/2018 you made me cry and i love it so much |
Kathy chapter 3 . 6/17/2018 And now I've got tears in my eyes, literally. Such strong emotions, great writing, great missing scene that should have been. Thanks, more please |