Reviews for Substitute Heavenly Guardian (reupload)
Moonlight 1234567890 chapter 1 . 6/21
But Toshiro and Rukia when he grows up will they get together?
Mystic Bluefrost chapter 35 . 6/1
Is Torshiro's mom alive or dead in this story? Please update!
Mystic Bluefrost chapter 8 . 5/26
Renji scoffed. "You don't know your sword's name. Someone like that trying to take me on is two thousand years too early!" I don't think Renji would ever say that to Zaraki.
Supreme Blitz chapter 34 . 5/4
PS, Did you put Esperanto on purpose instead of English?
Supreme Blitz chapter 35 . 5/4
I love the story so far keep it up. I like how you making Toshiro doing more creative things in battle instead of completely relying on powerups to beat characters like Ichigo does. His se of his tail in Bankai form in battle is underutilized in the show. He only his it once and that is it.
What about Toshiro's family? He hasn't had any interaction between his family throughout the story other than flashbacks with him and Momo.
FrostHunter chapter 34 . 9/9/2019
Oh dear not good
FrostHunter chapter 33 . 9/9/2019
Interesting
FrostHunter chapter 32 . 9/9/2019
Cool
Ricc850 chapter 34 . 9/9/2019
Of course, the head captain is keeping shit and being asshole. Hey how about you tell people what you plan on doing before you give them the wrong idea dumbass
grandzero chapter 31 . 8/7/2019
great work! just keep going.

p.s: i think that you could do some small arc's to keep it freash or put a twist in the story while stil being truh to the plot.
Guest chapter 30 . 7/31/2019
I say go for the filler story, if only so that this fic will have more material when all is said and done.

As a big Toshiro fan, this story is like a dream come true. The first chapter wasn't that good but it really picked up after that. I loved details like Toshiro binding Renji with kido instead of getting a random power-boost out of nowhere like Ichigo did the first time they fought, or his electrifying his sword the second time they met. I wonder if that wasn't forshadowing the lightning powers you gave Toshiro later. Also Renji using his sword's abilities creatively in that fight by hitting the ground and spinning Toshiro around, The back and forth with Uryu during the rescue arc, having the head captain still want to execute the ryoka after Aizen's betrayal, having Urahara actually called out on his bs.

Really looking forward to seeing where this goes from here since Urahara can't tell Orihime to stay out of things without breaking Toshiro's ultimatum, and since she's already training with Rukia and Chad there's no reason for her to go to the Soul Society like in the original.
FrostHunter chapter 31 . 7/30/2019
Hope toshiro gets control over lighting perhaps cero looking forward to toshiro and tier crossing blades again.
FrostHunter chapter 30 . 7/30/2019
He his mask now cool.
FrostHunter chapter 29 . 7/30/2019
Nice toshiro use tactics to deal with hiyori looks like toshiro going to find out why hollow didn't come out to play.
FrostHunter chapter 28 . 7/30/2019
What was that about?
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