Wonderful chapter

Nice Chapter

Islanzadi should kill Edward and Alice

please update soon

Add more chapters please

I have a feeling Peter is Bella child. But I think some of the other know what is going on

More pleases

plz update

Omg omg Omg Omg Omg Omg i love it. I'm really loving this story can't wait for the next update will it be soon

idiots..the lot of them..oh well..

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Please can you continue writing, I already love the story.

hahaha..but seriously..they should wipe out their memories of bella and jasper now..aphrodite should make the cullens fall for someone else too..update soon

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