| Reviews for Desire |
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   KyloRen'sgirl213 chapter 1 . 3/1 Love it very much |
| JediGemini chapter 25 . 9/5/2019 i read Josh and i think Until Dawn with Rami Malek |
| sexisassy123456789 chapter 35 . 3/25/2019 wow! I'm truly astounded at how detailed this story is! I can tell that you are a true fan of this game and its characters. you understand their personalities 100% and add your own originality. I do not feel as if I'm reading fanfiction. I feel as if I'm reading another version of an already amazing story! 3 |
| athousandroses chapter 101 . 2/16/2019 Amazing story! It was a fascinating look into the world of Detroit, and an interesting take on the characterd and what could have happened with them. And Artie was awesome :) |
| IrokoZ chapter 101 . 11/18/2018 i love this fic and i luv u omg the smut is just-! but this ended on a perfect fluffy note that really captured the love that smut can't show. what a great fanfic! |
| IrokoZ chapter 44 . 11/18/2018 Hahaha Hank you millenial. Android going thru puberty HAHAHA. Man, i gotta say u characterize so god damn well, everyone is in character so i have faith in whatever endingg you wrote already. cant wait to get there, best oc x simon/connor evvvvver |
| IrokoZ chapter 42 . 11/18/2018 Ahhhhhhhh i cant help but express my emotions! YES IT SHOULD BE ARTIE SIMON AND ARTIE x CONNER- my polyamorous ass shall have none of this "you can only love one person romantically" bullshit. so i can have lots of friends and family, but noooo, i can only have one person i love deeply?! efffff that homie. Polyamorous V relationship endgame dammit, she should end up with both, it doesn't feel right anyone interested in learning more about polyamory lmao.) OF course tho i fine with whatever ending, as long as it doesnt come outta left field. like have a build up towards whatever path u choose- cuz imo its leading to a poly triangle here (where one person dates 2 ppl) tho u can change that of course lol with foreshadowing and stuff. thaaaats my advice. also i havent at all checked if this story is done yet so if im ranting 4 no reason, sorry |
| AliceCullen3 chapter 106 . 11/7/2018 LOVE IT! |
| AliceCullen3 chapter 105 . 10/10/2018 LOVE IT! |
| DannyPhantom619 chapter 101 . 10/9/2018 Awesome story |
| AliceCullen3 chapter 104 . 10/6/2018 LOVE IT! |
| AliceCullen3 chapter 103 . 10/1/2018 LOVE IT! |
| AliceCullen3 chapter 102 . 9/27/2018 I LOVE IT! |
| DarkDust27 chapter 102 . 9/27/2018 Dog Sumo was adorable and I hope Connor and the others can help Hank out of his depression. Also would you consider doing a chapter about the interactions between android Sumo and Gavin Reed? Just want to see how that partnership would work out seeing as how Gavin isn’t a big fan of androids and is pretty aggressive about his dislike for them. |
| AliceCullen3 chapter 101 . 9/19/2018 YAY! I got a shout out! And I kind of guessed 100 chapters whether it would 100 chapters or Chapter 100. Also, LOVE IT! |
