thanks for the update, my man. I love this story

I guess now we know why Jaune has so many sisters.

Good story keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapter

I need more so please hurry

ok, we wait

I just thought the big sister was going to be part of the arc family.

ok

Update please

Read it. Love it. Can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve for us next.

when I first saw this story while browsing, I ignored it mostly since I don't know much about bioshock besides underwater cities, something about slugs giving weird powers, and knowing what big daddies are. but as time went on I decided to read the first chapter at least, and oddly enough I am HOOKED into this story now. I can already guess that our favorite blonde is the thing in the water after looking up pictures of a/the big sister.

my only hope being that there is a pairing (since I didn't see the pairing.. thing... forgot what the symbol was called that you put on the title page) and that pairing being arkos.

So I was wondering if delta was in store for us or when in timeline of the bioshock universe are we in.

Well the story is starting to pick up now. Keep up the good work. Won’t Fav or Fol until a few more chapters are out but don’t let this stop you from printing out more chapters.

nice looks like this will be good

So the fourth Relic is in Rapture, if you think about it Choice fit's Rapture perfectly since people where allowed to do what they want without regulations and ethics from holding them back to the point where it allowed the psychos and monsters to take over, Cohen, Steinman, Fontaine, Lamb, etc. Yeah Salem is going to have a hard time to get that one since the "citizens" and ocean flooded sections are a good deterrent. Unless this takes place before everything went to hell, would also make a good story on how people react to a city like Rapture.

So I take that Jaune will be a little/big brother. What kind of weapons, equipment, and plasmids can we expect from him?