uh oh! hope the guys figure something out!

keep up the great work! i'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Very exciting! Love the scattered references to the show; especially breaking the fourth wall! Perfect!

Oh no! Poor Davy!

Great story! Update soon!

oh no! poor davy! great story so far!

Uh oh, this is getting exciting! I love the concept of the story, bringing the villains back with Me. zero at the helm. I like that it captures the silliness of the show, but also adds a level of angst and adventure. I can't wait to read more!

Well... that took a turn for the worse. Poor Davy... I’m quite curious to see how this experiment works out, and how things keep going from here. I like your twist of having previous villains coming in via Zero. It’s a good idea :-) Keep up the good work!

Oh no! What’re the guys going to do now? This story is very exciting. I haven’t read a good Monkees story in quite a while, so I’m happy to have found yours :) I can’t wait until the next chapter!

This is great! Please keep writing :) I can't wait to read what happens next

I love this story so far! It has a good mix of action/hurt comfort. Besides, Micky is my favorite so I like when stories focus on him a bit haha. I really hope you write more! I’ll be following :)

Poor Micky! And let's not forget about Peter. This is only the second chapter, and you've already introduced a brand new character, brought back two bad guys from the series, and injured two of the boys! Talk about exciting! Can't wait for the rest.

I'm curious to see the chapter already!
Great chapter