All personal tastes aside, I believe the Granger girl and the ginger girl should have been punished as well. Please write another. Also, more in depth please. More...more please!

Good job on the story

Aww I think the part with the twins was the sweetest

I actually really like this. Most of these fics with multiple slaves are just the same thing repeated over and over but you manage this really well and I damn well hope you update soon

I want more about the training and fluff with the twins
Please!

This is great. It would’ve been much better if you had stretched it into a full length story instead of rushing the ending. It would’ve been interesting to read about the downfall of Dumbledore, as well as the development of the relationships between Harry and his individual slaves, and their dynamic as a group.

Could be made longer. I like it

I love this! Please add some more chapters!

Quite naughty and arousing, I quite like it.

This was deliciously hot and steamy! I wish it was longer to show more of what Harry and everyone went through when Dumbles realised the jig was up etc maybe it could be turned into a chaptered fic!?

awesome