You should definitely continue this fic. Post the rest of it or at least update it. It's a pretty good story. But you haven't updated this fic in SO LONG. please post more soon!

Ok I give this story 10 stars so far! I'm very interested in how this story is going turn out. I love how you wrote Princess Myrcella to be a strong growing young lady with a sharp mind. I'm keeping my eye out for the next chapter.

This is so good, I hope you continue it. I want to know why Robert hates Harry. And what happened that Harry almost died?

ahh this is so good! Can’t wait for the next update!

good

Catelyn is cheating? Or did she kidnap Tyrion? If she is cheating then its bs for her to hate Jon.

Not a bad start, I would love to see more.

Hi, for this being your first fic your doing pretty swell so far. Especially since English isn't your first language. I'm enjoying the idea behind this as well. He's second born, was exiled, unknown lady that as far as I can tell isn't a reincarnation of any Harry Potter females, etc.

I did notice a number of mistakes and would suggest getting an english native friend/ someone who enjoys the story to beta if you haven't already.

Awaiting more.

Please continue!

when there will be update

The Mountain's name is Gregor, not Gregory. and why didn't Harry kill the Darkstar?

while it's noticeable that english isn't your first language, it isn't too bad. my main comment would towards your ANs. specifically, the one at the end of this chapter. stop writing in all caps. it's the written equivalent of shouting, and will put off a lot of people.

more please. updated soon

continue pattern that is super cool