Wow, what a brilliant story! You are a very talented writer; this could easily have been an episode from the show. I’ve read quite a few stories on fanfiction, and yours are definitely some of the best and, in my opinion, worthy of a lot more reviews!
Thank you :)

Such a wonderful story! This is such a cool, creative plot and I’d totally believe it if this actually happened in the series. And YES, Sam totally deserves a whole soul after all the pain he’s been through. Thank you for writing this, and AWESOME job!

OH MY GOSH. THIS IS SUCH AN AWESOME IDEA. I only wish this happened in the show!

Onward to chapter two...!

This was an amazing story - I thoroughly enjoyed it. It was great to read about Sam, Dean and Jack bonding, and the action was incredible! That final showdown did not disappoint - well done!

Awesome story.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story! Looking forward to reading more SPN stories from you!

Perfect ending for Ella! I'm glad the plot didn't leave her as a traumatized orphan...Sam and Dean could hardly call this a win if that had been the case :P

Cool, Sam got the kill! What does that make it, Sam: 1, Dean...everything else? Ah well, Sam'll get there eventually. Who can blame him for not getting the big kills, though, when he's always the one dealing with psychic powers, demon blood, hallucinations, trials, angel possession...guy's always got some kind of issue going on, lol :P

Thanks again for writing this :)

awesome ending! You actually did follow the prompt pretty well and it turned out good :)

Aw, poor Ella. I really didn't think her mom was going to die, and definitely not so soon. And her dad is in a coma...agh, what's going to happen to this poor little girl?!
Oh nos another vision! agh, the suspense!

I was SO excited to see you'd turned this into a story! I had no idea you were going to use the prompt at all, let alone take it beyond 'The Chronicles of Winchester HC;' this is so awesome! (also had no idea I wasn't already following you, or I'd have descended upon this story much sooner :P)

Curses, Yellow Eyes is back!
(Can Sam kill him this time? I think he deserves a shot...Dean gets all the big kills)

Great sparring scene; nice action. Nice detail about punching with the heel of the palm. It's nice to see characters who were trained by an ex-Marine actually using this technique, even if only in a fanfic while their real selves go magically not breaking their hands from slamming their fists into people's faces :)

Sam gives their aliases to Angela, immediately followed by Dean introducing himself as Dean. XD Way to go blowing the cover, dude. Face palm in shame, Winchester. Face palm in shame.

Angela opens door to and agrees to talk with three strange men while she and her small daughter are seemingly the only ones home...must be safe neighborhood... XD

And...now I want pizza. :D

Yay, visions! So intriguing how they keep changing so quickly...I'm so excited to see what it all means and where it will all lead!

I was mentally 'eeeeeeeeeeeee-ing' all throughout this chapter XD Agh, I'm so excited to read the rest! Thank you so much for writing this!

Curious to see what happens. I am surprised that sam has no issue with Jack touching Dean’s soul. I can understand that he wants to use a soul but for any brother to just let the other be a guinea pig so easily seems strange.

This was really good! I look forward to the next chapter!

Nice cliffhanger :)
Liked the way you showed they're both tearing themselves up about failing Jack, but in different ways, as they usually do. Then they stow the crap and join together to face the big bad, also, the way they usually do. Nice update!

Cool story, I cant wait to see what happens next.

Cool story