I really hate that the System is talking to him it comes across as really cringe

I'll keep reading but if the system keeps talking to him i won't continue

Please continue writing, for all its flaws I still love it. By all it’s flaws, I don’t mean much just a few grammar errors here and there along with choppy parts where you tried too hard to speed it along.

Oh, also? Really? They questioned that he COULD kill him but not his mental capacity to kill? They didn’t question him when he came in the house with a head in a bag SMILING!? For fucks sake, if there’s anything that grates on my nerves it’s that.

I liked the little moment between them all it was quite funny, though it could have been smoother and just slightly more natural. It was just a bit too choppy in some places, jumping from one explanation to the next just a bit too quickly. Couldn’t help but feel that it was slightly off, though I say this with emphasis on SLIGHTLY. Since Harry is a child he wouldn’t be quick to a story that didn’t tell it all but said enough. That’s why his part is believable, but with the adults and even just slightly Nymphadora? Well let’s just say they moved on from question to question abnormally fast. The disbelief wasn’t quite stretched out enough, and they weren’t readily questioning how he did it or even declaring they don’t want to know(except Minerva). Minerva was definitely the most believable adult. Heh sorry I rambled, I completely lost track of where I was going with this, but point is it was just a bit too rushed. I still love this chapter though.

Super fun. I hope you continue. Can’t wait until he remembered all the books. Hopefully it’s something like he and Dora and Hermione hold them one all at once and bam they all get the skill.

Great story hope you come back to it also enjoy borderlands I sure did

I don't know if your still writing this but if you are I look forward to it. This brings me back to when I was eleven and was reading the Harry Potter series for the first time.

Oh gosh... I expected a bit more... anger, embarrassment or something from Nymphadora. I mean she did just spend almost a month living, bathing and sleeping with a then year old boy.

Oh no.. wait is that Hagrid? Hmm could be, I think I remember something about him being able to sense magic a bit better? Oh well lets see.

"I was raised by Kneazles!" Harry could say later in life as everyone looked at him as if he was insane...

I love the story. I disagreed with some of the Perks he chose, but that's because I'm me, not your take on a 10 year old boy, but I liked that he picked them based off of his own reasoning. Thanks for writing what you have and I will keep an eye out for any more chapters if you decide to continue the story.

Meh, I like some slash, and it's a shame to discount an entire fanfiction based off the pairing(as long as the pairing isn't the main point,) after all, a large majority of the Harry Potter fandom disliked the pairings, RemusXTonks, GinnyXHarry, and HermioneXRon, but isn't it a good thing that those people still read the last couple of books even when the pairings became obvious?
All that is to say, don't completely write off all slash fanfictions, though I understand drawing the line at the ones with the large age gaps.
By the way, I am in favor of a slash filter, sometimes I'm in the mood for it, sometimes I'm not. Just like sometimes I'm in the mood for Adventure and sometimes I'm in the mood for Angst.

I like that you did leave some of the events to chance by flipping coins and rolling dice. I don't know why I do but I do, so thanks for that.

Horrible choices for perks on int and wis he has to completely use all his mana to benefit from well of infinity which isn't going to happen often. Much less since he also got great sage making the well even less useful. I feel he should have chosen Evolution booster to get better dmg and a wider variety of effects from his spells. If he did get Evo boost then great sage would have been a good choice with legilimency after that. Can't keep me down would have the better choice for vit perk which would double his werewolf regen

All caught up now, and this seems like a pretty nice story. I look forward to more.