| Reviews for Poison Dove & Maelstrom Fox |
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rockyroad69 chapter 26 . 8/13 Thanks for the treat thus far. Can't wait for the next update. |
LegendaryMob chapter 14 . 8/12 Can i just skip most chapter till the chapter of his return to konoha? All this long winded talks and foreign unfamiliar scenes kinda bore me. so much so, that i can't seem to manage to finish it... |
Makuro767 chapter 5 . 8/6 Well...Hassashin actually really translate to something that describe those heavy smokers in any eatery or sides of roads that likes grouping together. At least that's what a native speaker of the language told me. Basically, they are information gatherer disguised as gossiping old men. Like traditional ninja, they gather and sell informations rather than accepting missions that includes murder. That ninja fact came from a man in Japan who is the apprentice of one of the last traditional ninja master. |
DarknessKiller123 chapter 26 . 7/23 Dos, this Is a great story. Waiting for More. |
copet chapter 26 . 7/18 Wow, I really love every chapter. This is a good last chapter for Semiramis's introduction to Konoha. I'm intrigued if Anko's weapon is a change brought by Semiramis's presence in Naruto's world or if it is still from Naruto's world? Also, this rivalry between Danzo and Semiramis will be EPIC! Good day to you! |
Kouha Ren chapter 1 . 7/8 Whoa, the start is good, this is interesting~ |
PikaMew1288 chapter 1 . 6/27 I'm surprised that there aren't more stories like this or ones where Naruto or FemNaruto summons Tamamo as a Toddler or pre-Genin Naruto Summons Tamamo who decides to Teach him Kitsune tricks. Hell, can you imagine a Naruto who was taught by Chiron, Aife or Scathach? Canon Naruto had shitty Teachers so it makes me wonder just how far they could reach with proper training. That seems to be a stable with Shonen Anime and Manga. Son Goku from Dragon Ball was one of the few Shonen Heroes who actually had decent teachers. I just wonder how Semiramis will react when they eventually encounter Sasori. |
Nosckri3 chapter 26 . 6/27 This story just gets better and better. I love the complex repercussions and the callbacks to previous dialogue or events that happen in the story! Keep it up! |
Uchiha chapter 26 . 6/24 This chapter was definitely worth the wait. You did a good job on this no matter how long it takes to write this chapter all the grammer was well done. Seeing the relationship between Semiramis and Naruto grow I can see such a love between them, maybe somehow Semiramis will somehow stay in Narutos world and they can be together, despite their age difference they bonded with each other for 3 years. |
MartianGod chapter 12 . 6/26 semiramis already told naruto about her mother by this point. |
RunOnSentences chapter 6 . 6/26 I havent watched the fate series so I can’t be sure, but is she really that much stronger than a legendary sannin? Jiraiya is a beast |
RunOnSentences chapter 4 . 6/26 He ain’t use a rasengan yet? At this point, it’s the only move he’ll ever use other than shadow clone |
Alexis chapter 26 . 6/23 J adore votre histoire c est incroyable de plus vous respectez extrêmement bien les personnages et les faisant grandir en même temps et la romance qui commence est incroyable et beau je suis extrêmement impatiente pour la suite |
dlowe265 chapter 26 . 6/23 Fucking awesome update as soon as possible |
Ace of Spies chapter 26 . 6/22 Ugh... I love this story so much. I know you have so many projects going on so an update every few months isn’t something I’m going to complain about, especially with how long the chapters are. Really looking forward to seeing more of Semiramis fight. I mean, we know how powerful she is and she hasn’t had to go all out just yet, but we’ve also seen her on the defensive and struggle. It’s an interesting balance and I quite like her portrayal |