Soooo beautiful! I love itittt,,!

Wow, this was great! I really love all the underlying and unspoken communication that goes on with these two and you nailed it! Luffy's way of seeing straight to the heart of people and his own overwhelming personality and willpower matched with Law's taciturn intelligence and drive plus his own way of measuring others without much interaction makes for very interesting exchanges.

These two captains each have a presence that fill a room on their own and I think you did well to capture the necessary give-and-take components of their friendship (despite Law's protests) for these two to get along. Luffy may be a lovable idiot, but he's an insightful idiot (stupid-smart? simple-genius? Sigh. He's his own category I think, lol) and he knows when to back off and when to push.

I really enjoyed how you wrote Law, I think you captured his character very well! Great job with this fic! Now I'm off to your profile page to see if you've written any others like this!

Oh wow, what a nice progress. I would love to read more. Your writings style is good and easy to read

I love this! You wrote Law's and Luff's personality quite well. I also love Bepo's small interaction with Law. Such a bestfriend, lol. He really knows Law too well but he doesn't push Law too much about it. You had grasp well Luffy's idea of an alliance and I can't stop laughing at his understanding about the proposition. I really love Robin's explanation on it though, knowing what kind of ideas Luffy wanted to hear. So in the end, it was Luffy's win, lol. Hope to see an update on this :D.

I love everything about this! I dunno if you're gonna continue it, but i hope you do!

OH, MY GOOOOOD! I am smiling SO MUCH, it's actually kind of crazy! I LOVE THIS so much, and I don't even ship them! THE FEEEEEELS! Oh, my God, I would never have guessed you're not as sure about writing for Law because I thought you wrote him INCREDIBLY well! LOVE it! This was SO well written and beautiful, the parts about remembering Luffy after the War of the Best and especially during the Doflamingo fight GOT ME THE MOST, and I can't get over how much I want MORE! I hope you turn this into a series or something! I would LOVE it! This was absolutely PHENOMENAL! Rock on!