Always nice to see Jerome back and his obsession with Bird is great. Can't wait to see the carnival and her reunite with Jim. Great update.

As always, amazing! I loved every minute of it!

Love the chapter and I like when Jim is worried for bird

You're an amazing author, I can't wait for another chapter!

Fantastic chapter! I hope Jim and Bird will recover.

I have always loved the interaction with Bird and Jerome. I love Jerome and was happy to see that he was back. I get why Bird is being so distant with Jim, but I just want them to get back together. I love them so much. I love this story so much. I can't wait to see where this story goes and as much as I don't want to see how this ends.

I can't even begin to tell you how excited I was when I saw you had posted a new chapter! I love Bird and her story!

Good to see you updating again, loved the chapter!

Thank you for continuing this book even though the show is over. Your real fans are still here and will always let you know we're reading. JEROME IS MY FAVORITE CHARACTER AND THIS CHAPTER WAS PERFECT. I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE THEM TOGETHER AT THE DARK CARNIVAL. Hope to see the update soon.

Wow I thought I would never see an update from you again. This was really great. I loved your interactions between Bird and Jerome very creative and entertaining. I can’t waif to see what she does at that carnival with her brother. Also I don’t blame you for losing interest or staying motivated Gotham was one of my favorite shows and I’m still bummed that it’s done. I hope you continue though I really enjoy your story and hope to see Birds end. Great job once again and I hope to see more.

This story is one of my favorites. Please keep to it and thank you.
- Movielover

I'm looking forward to the next update! :)

I love this story please keep up the good work

I have been binge reading to catch up and almost threw my phone at the wall when I realised I’d achieved it!
What demon did you deal with to write such magic? Hook a girl up!
But seriously, I am in constant awe of the way you weave Bird so effortlessly into the plot. They way she’s a proactive protagonist and not a reactive one. Sure, we’re following the basic plot of Gothambut we’re following it Birds way!
I’m interested in seeing where severing ties with Oswald goes -is this really a change for good?
I am also so glad that you haven’t written Bird just falling back into Jim’s arms. Yes I am a massive Bim-shipper. Like, from way back in WWBS when she was with Harvey I still shipped Bim haha but I also love this growth in their relationship.
Your attention to character development and growth is one of my favourite things. It’s why your writing never seems stagnant or ‘write by numbers’
Amazing! Spectacular! Bring on Jerome!

Ahhh this is so exciting! Jerome is back finally! Cannot wait to read the next chapter!