Yeah I didn’t really like it, too much angst but it was long and I do like long novels. Eh I’d give it a 6/10 I didn’t really enjoy myself but when people are out and about infected and you gotta stay inside on a day off, then sure, this was a good time sink.

I have a problem with this, Zabuza and Haku we’re getting money to support the rebellion in Kiri. Since Mei is already mizukage that means it won and Zabuza would’ve gone back to support Mei.

Okay I was having trouble reading this but I get it now this is going great

Jesus I keep trying to slog through this but it’s so damn hard, how do you root for a character that is just so... pathetic. I pity him sure but seriously every other jinchuriki has some thing that makes them perform well, even just a larger chakra pool than regular shinobi but Kane has nothing going for him, or is so untalented he can’t do anything well. Even main show Naruto kept trying and was semi useful and he had the exact same starting circumstances as Kane. Nobody has come to like Kane like they did Naruto because he is so worthless.

Is the author really dead?

Title Dropped! Love it!

In case if your new to this story, the author is dead, he die in a car accident.

Do not suck how can this be the end this story is great do not tell me that there is nothing but a waste of time however I still do not regret this story was great

I did not see that coming I seriously did not see that coming one hell of a teist

You're a very good storyteller with the Uchiha. Your depiction of them is believable, yet likable. Something many authors struggle with. The citizens if Konoha as a whole however, well, I'm definitely rooting for Orochimaru's retribution. Lol

So I was close, but not in the way I thought. Still, I've always hated Minato, so seeing him miserable is pretty cathartic. In fact, you are very good at inflicting misery on characters. Especially retributive misery. Bravo.

Man oh man. I hope to God I'm wrong, but I really hope Naruko isn't trying to get close to him because he's a flight/suicide risk. I could absolutely see Danzo manipulating or advising Minato into doing something like that.

Kakashi wtf you haven't even TAUGHT them anything, and now you suddenly sign them up for the chunin exams? do you want to kill them?-

Honestly Minato would figure it out with NO info on pain, he's a freaken genius What about Sage Mode? He would surely use it. Also remember he CLOSED his eyes and he was in sage mode.

Honestly Minato would figure it out with NO info on pain, he's a freaken genius