| Reviews for Zoey Hanson's Five Nights! |
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GirlFish chapter 2 . 6/28/2018 I wonder how Bloom will get even with Short Fuse... Take away her power somehow...? (Is killing her an option?) *If yes then those girls can fight it out until one can't fight anymore, as a scenario...if you don't have something else in mind...* As for her and Sky, I'm not sure if they're going out anymore because she might be seeing someone else. (Although I could be wrong...) |
MC-Labs chapter 1 . 6/27/2018 Actually GirlFish, Short Fuse already has the power to transform into a Cerberus like creature... |
GirlFish chapter 1 . 6/26/2018 An idea of mine for your dragon story is that Ms. Cheater, Short Fuse becomes a hydra with either gorgon abilities. Or she becomes a dragon permanently. Or she becomes a spider-scorpion-dragon chimera. Or a cross between a human and a dragon... (I might be weird for saying this, but a human covered in scales, wings and a tail can be really pretty to look at...or down right disturbing.) *Of course then there's the Dragon-Half anime where the girl in question had a tail, wings and horns-other then that she looked like a normal human girl.* (If death isn't an option, then a curse is the next best thing.) (*I mean, aren't Bloom and Sky meant to be together...?!*) It sounds like Short Fuse is using her 'dragonic beauty' to attract guys. (That's something that rubs me the wrong way. So I really hope that cheater gets some amount of karma-and I think being stuck as a beast might humble her...if I'm not mistaken. Although with a girl like that, you never really know.) (***I hope I'm not being too mean here, but if that Short Fuse girl keeps cheating on guys...well let's just say that something needs to be done. Because I for one, have had just about enough of that headache.***) |
GirlFish chapter 7 . 6/21/2018 That's what I call a bittersweet ending; Zoey lost her life but now she seems pretty happy...if you don't mind me saying so. |
DragonKnight15 chapter 7 . 6/12/2018 ... Chainsaw, sledgehammer... and being herself... okay, I would honestly review the other chapters but this is fine. You my friend earn a review, this was short but simple because unless they were ghosts, Ichigo would run away screaming. Robots... not so much. Sad ending but with how you set up the prologue; better than nothing. I wish you went into more detail with the part of Ichigo/Zoey's backstory in this what-if but regardless, everything else was... not as scary as I would imagine it. Ichigo destroyed the evil of Freddy and the crew by the purple man and now well at least they won't kill anyone else right? Good ending. |