Meh pathetic

Why is he stuttering? Why is she stuttering does no one here speak like a normal person

Just a thought but you'd think that christmas would be hell for devils (no pun intended). It's the aniversery of christs birth and a holy day so you'd think that it would be like the first day back to school with no AC and it's 90 degrees outside for devils.

Friend. You haven’t updated for a long time are yo okay? Have you abandoned this fic. If not I hope to see a 10k chapter next update :))

Dude the only way this would have been a bigger stomp out was if Naruto actually stomped on him.

I'll waiting patiently

i do hope you updated soon, its a interesting story n i like how u have developed the characters, even though its not in the traditional senss

Don't know if i should continue reading this..

I came here to read Naruto in the DxD but so far what i saw is an Oc using Naruto's Name and series reputation.

This naruto has no semblance to the canon naruto at all. They have different personality and he's abilities is nothing similar to the original. Tbh, I sort of feel cheated. Like i'm still reading this hoping to find a semblance of the original naruto only to see more of this fake naruto and force to read more cause it's 'Naruto'. *sigh*...

I'm in ch4 and this seriously is getting hard to read..

Reasons:
's - they imo feels like a fancy DIY stickers that you stick on a picture. Yet no matter how fancy they are, they just feels out of place. I rather see an established character to xover instead of reading an oc in a fic world

's confusing at times and some matters just makes no sense -
i understand that naruto is sort of the family's black sheep cause apparently he's weak and he's not special enough compares to rias but then how come he manage to one hit defeat esdeath just cause of a mental trauma and a fluke. He's strength and powers makes no sense to me and then he's always researching stuff to get stronger but you don't really give content and context on what he's researching and what's it about. So were does all his strength coming from? He's not shown training and all his research doesn't seem fruitful cause of lack of context so is he strong or not?

is he so whiny when everything so far is just too convenient for him -
He's pieces just fall in his lap and despite some mishap of gaining a boy who just happens to hate him and attempted to murder him. The next day(chapter) that mishap just doesn't matter anymore cause all of the sudden he gain three capable female pieces who conveniently like him no string attach. Now he have an All girl peerage a dream for most male devils. So wth..?

I don't see anything that said cuben fiber could stop a knife, let alone supernatural forces. It's definitely not stronger than steel in general, though it is lighter weight by far. There was a fantasy material used in fate stay night that I thought was pretty cool called Diamine weave or whatever. My point is, you should have used something that doesn't exist so that people can't dispute it when they look it up and find that it can't do what you say it does, since it's a fantasy material. Kinda like mythril, adamantite or orichalcum.

Hopefully we can get an update on this soon along with the god of requip

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i love this story!

keep it up!

stop making Naruto sound like an old man. Even if he was supposed to seem mature, this is too much for a ten-year-old.

Man, I really hate authors who use the name of protagonists from other novels like Naruto, Harry Potter, etc to get more views on their fanfics when in truth, their own MC would be far more differnent than either Naruto or Harry.
Just like here, the Naruto in this story seems smart but he also lacks confidence in himself. So it is clear that he is not Naruto at all.
So please stop using Naruto's name like that to get more views. It's despicable and disgusting.