Por favor autor escreva mais a sua historia é maravilhosa

Please update soon

Please update. And also, don't listen to the negatine reviews. It's the internet, there will always be those who strive to put down your writing.

I understand how you feel. I am 16 and am also writing some GoT fics. I get negative reviews but do my best to ignore them. I am writing one right now called The Dragon King and it has gotten almsot entirely good reviews, but there was one person who reviewed with the goal of being hurtful.

Also, your creativity is very impressive and makes up for the occasional lack of correct punctuatuion. You also use excellent vocab words that add meaning to the story. All in all, you have a talent for writing, don't let anyone tell you otherwise.

-Kylo_RenFF

Nice chapter Please up te Next soon

WOW excelent chapter

Good chapter

Great

Nice chapter

Great history

Always a pleasure to see an update to this story! Thank you!

I'm glad you are back with a new chapter. I was wondering what happened to you

Nooooo your cruel cruel author! That was to short. We want More I say More. Can't wait for the next chapter and keep going. Haters who

Please update and ignore the haters. Can't wait for the next chapter

Where did he get the armor and bow from? It was a little out of character for Cersei and Joffrey to not retaliate as they are both petty, spiteful people. The story is good but you could add a few more details to it to make it flow more smoothly.

I dig this story, I like the beast aster qualities Jon has. Boo to the naysayers, always do annoying like Tyrion say wear it like armor.