Somehow everyone is emotionally distraught, as well as emotionally acceptable but can not pick up that Jaune is going to kill himself while in everyone's (almost everyones...) good graces, and somehow no one is able to pick it up (almost everyone)...

Don't get this the wrong way, but, how?

Jaune comes to the conclusion from reading THIS situation: having a near death experience made everyone sad as hell at the chance that Jaune was going to be buried six-feet under. That it would be a good idea to commit suicide, which in-reality, goes back to the VERY situation he just got himself OUT of... am I missing something here, or is Jaune being stupid for the sack of stupidity, or is there an actual reason.

i need the next chapter.

you literally left us on a cliff hanger.

literally.

Soooo, I just wanna say I love how the fic is written just read the first chapter and there's some genuine talent here and I want to leave a review complimenting that (plus I love white knight) but I don't think I'll be able to read it right now. Kinda read ahead and spoiled the most recent chapter for myself along with reading some reviews, and I have chronic issues with depression, a history of suicidal ideation, and I'm kinda in downswing right now so yeah probably not super healthy for me to be reading this, been looking for heartwarming stuff instead lol. I just wanted to leave a genuinely complimentary review saying I hope you keep up the good work! I'll probably come back to this either when there's a few more chapters up with a better idea where the fics going or when I get on my next upswing and am feeling better. I hope you have a great day! Thanks for the story!

I really enjoyed this chapter. That ending brought a chill up my spine as I realised where he ended up.

The way you dealt with Saphron's backstory is a similar idea I have for my vampire-Jaune fic. Although, our worlds are in two seperate places, it seems to be a common theme among fic writers.

Though, I didn't know Neo had taken on Pyrrha's face! I can't imagine how terrifying that must have been for Jaune. I have yet to watch the rest of Vol's 6-7 because I'm too afraid to start watching RWBY again for fear of another volume 3.

If I were Jaune's position, it wouldn't matter if she killed me. I would have done everything I could to gut her on the spot.

This is a good fucking chapter mate and you handle so many different issues in this very impressive. That cliffhanger at the end though, utterly perfect. I can’t wait until the next chapter to see what happens next

Please tell me this isnt the final chapter of this one

I can’t tell you how much I appreciate this fic. I love that it shows how it’s OK not to be OK sometimes.

Ok, I mean this in the nicest way possible. But F You! Good god did what was happening not click until almost the very end. F your cliffhanger, and get back to writing! I need to know! There has been enough pain and suffering this year, I need to see Weiss bitching out our boy for being the stupidest idiot in the whole of Remnant.

... I'm conflicted to be with the, "fuck you" group, but I'm also understanding of the situation that needed to happen. You evil, psychotic, tear-thirsty bastard.

I can tell that, like myself, you're not a merciful god either.

Breaking Pyrrha's heart like that. Shame on you!

Fuck you with this ending

HECC HECC HECC HECC TOO REAL TOO REAL

realistically i feel you are Forcing Weiss x Jaune.. With this Angst... If she does not like him. if she does not like him. sometimes the characters get along as Grow as People.

For Example You have Weiss have See him in better Light as Grow as a person .. While Jaune get over his crush of her and focus on his own goals

Ow. That hurt, man. Was never particularly a fan of Pyrrha in canon, but you've given her more than enough actual depth that this really tugged at the heartstrings. Guess it's a good thing that Team JNPR isn't really a major focus based off where you are in the plot, because they would NOT do well right now with some action. Also, just wondering, but do you plan on having Team CFVY gone til after the dance like they were in V2, or are we going to get them back sooner?

thank you for the update. while it made me sad it had to happen...

looking forward to a slightly fluffier happier next chap