Reviews for Marsaxlokk
Guest 2.0 chapter 35 . 6/2
Enjoying your updates minus the adds that have started splicing the text! Unsure why fanfic does it but it makes reading anything terribly disjointed and less enjoyable. Maybe they'll sort it by your next update it.

Looking forward to more and hope you're staying safe and healthy!
Guest chapter 35 . 4/28
OK. Presuming this is after Sokovia. So Stark calling Barnes "Murderbot"...
"Pot to kettle...ground control to major dumb***"
Blue Phoenix 217 chapter 7 . 2/26
and a translation for the russian in this chapter please
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Blue Phoenix 217 chapter 6 . 2/26
Could I have a translation for the Russian in this chapter please? x
Guest chapter 32 . 12/18/2019
Wondering... do we play the "X-Men" theme song now?
Guest chapter 24 . 12/17/2019
She was as intelligent as she was beautiful and quite devious for a pint-sized Southern belle...

Being beautiful, pint sized, intelligent woman the South y'all kinda have to be. Most of our IQ points were immediately discounted. And too many felt the small size made them a perfect fit for under the proverbial shoe or thumb.
Guest chapter 14 . 12/10/2019
There is nothing in MCU canon re: chocolate...

**cough ** actually, when Captain America is in Bucky's apartment in Bucharest, right next to the journal that he found on the top of the fridge, there is a chocolate bar. Its almost an "if you aren't paying attention" thing.
Guest chapter 11 . 12/7/2019
"Go ahead. Make fun all you like. At least I don't use words that went out with my grandfather."
Yes, she does! (LOL) Every time I see her "think" or "say" Golly! or Gosh! I'm having Leave It To Beaver flashbacks (snicker)
Guest chapter 8 . 5/29/2019
Would be really, really nice if FFN would allow copy and paste to work so I could run the Cyrillic through Google Translate and have at least an idea what Bucky is saying. :/
Bret90 chapter 25 . 2/17/2019
Such a great story, never ever I have seen anything like your story described the soldier mindset.
Bucky living a normal life notwithstanding his personal issues is really interesting! That's amazing!
The a as a civilian was thought a great lesson here, people would hurt at anytime chance because of who Bucky is! Silly move was planning that trip without proper preparation, Steve's wife did all mess up! She shouldn't have left her house with strangers even though they were The as family!
Now that's over, kids are safe, they better tell these two women what to expect from the kind of lives Captain America and the Winter Soldier have been living!
SunnySides chapter 23 . 12/18/2018
Well. Interfamilial strains. Sounds fun. I definitely would not put it past Thea to walk out on them if they refuse to be at least a little amicable and understanding. Although I would certainly find it hard to believe, under the circumstances, that the assassin married your sister.

I bet Bucky followed her. Am I right?

UPDATE SOON!
SunnySides chapter 22 . 11/15/2018
I hope you've been doing all right. This was a large time gap from your last update. I almost feared you'd dropped this wonderful story!

I've read so few stories where the main OC is handicapped in some fashion. Usually it's blindness, dumbness, or deafness. If not, then the handicap is a temporary injury (and, more often than not, the author forgets that the OC is injured a few chapters later). A permanent issue like RA is not out of bounds for my reading preferences. It's good to give such things awareness. Everyone is human.

HAPPY REUNION! Yay! Followed by Bucky quickly devolving back into "the world is out to get me and they'll use my loved ones and 3 out of 4 are defenseless" possessiveness. Not so yay. (Btw, by 3/4, I meant Thea, Jamie, Winnie, and Steve). Though Bucky's not wrong...

Not in Wakanda forever? I'm good with that. I'm rather "meh" on the place. Though, for them to go anywhere else, there'll definitely be roadblocks. Tony is the only one who comes to mind who I think has the clout and money to get Bucky and Family to wherever they need to go. Even though Tony has a huge grudge at the moment. But he kept the flip phone, so that has to mean something!

UPDATE SOON!

P.S., RIP Stan Lee. He will be missed.
SunnySides chapter 21 . 10/2/2018
10? 10?! :D

I'm so glad you aren't doing IW. I'm semi boycotting Marvel for disintegrating Bucky. (Even though I've heard Sebestian Stan is still contractually obligated for a few more movies, so Bucky is coming back...) Since you're going AU but will probably be covering the Wakandan deprogramming, maaaayyybe there'll be more Winter Soldier relapses?
...I'll be honest, I want to see if even the Soldier is affected by Bucky's love for Thea.

I'm anticipating a happy reunion!

UPDATE SOON!
Santee Ordrin chapter 20 . 9/29/2018
I like how you have tied your Captain America story into this one. It has added a dimension I think is lacking in others. And similar to the Marvel Universe(MU), you are having to track and stay in tune with what is happening in each story as well as the MU which in itself is almost as difficult. I am so glad that this story is out there.

Hope you are feeling better and can't wait til the next chapter in either story.
SunnySides chapter 20 . 9/24/2018
How did I miss chapter 19?! I don't know. Did you double update?

I'm very happy you're feeling better. It's not because I just want updates. I like it when people are healthy.

While I'm a tad disappointed that Thea didn't have the chance to meet the Soldier, I perfectly understand your reasons for it. I'm also liking the time skips, so you're not just writing a rehash of the movie. You're keeping it original. Thumbs up!

Looks like things are winding down. One or two more chapters? I'll be sad when this is finished.

UPDATE SOON!
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