When are you continuing?

This version is much better than the original so far. Keep it up. I like the origin of how Ronnie and Lincoln met. That was cute.

Gosh,I wonder what will happen next. But anyway,I love your rewrite story. Keep up the good work.

I knew this changes nothing...

Very curious how Lincoln and the Loud Sisters don't remember Ronnie Anne after their encounters years earlier. That ending line is very ominous sounding, I'm guessing Ronnie Anne managed to over power the Loud Sisters.

The plot would have been better if it was Lily who's being abused.

And that, ladies and gentlemen, is what we like to call "going downhill."

Well, that went pear-shaped pretty damned quick. It's one thing to "teach him a lesson" for "always screwing up" because he's so jenked up by their shutting him out of the loop, he lost all sense of what was appropriate. It's quite another for them to rile up Bobby by tearing Ronnie Anne a new one. I think that this war is going to be called on account of boyfriend.

Hmmm, so the family aside from the Nicer Sisters do not give a damn Lincoln killed himself. Does the family always have to be made unlikeable?

puts on brace knockels - that tears it

Lola being Satan was a little weird in the last version of the story. So, what if Satan trapped the real Lola somewhere and disguised himself as her? I'd feel better if all the sisters were still around.

Looks like Ronnie Anne gave those girls a beating of a lifetime.

Great Now what they Blame Lincoln? When they tell Bobby

Yeah, one out two things may have happened.

1. Ronnie Anne had her ass handed to her...

2. She tried to fight back, but Lori may have pulled a treacherous move on her.

All this over a stupid vase ? God the family can be idiots at time...