great chapter :D

Great story, really! Your doing good. As a writer myself...i can see your no amateur. Keep going and the skies the limit with the potential here, haha!

Thanks for the hard work love the story _

Good new chapter! it is very cohesive, and the characters are acting like actual people, which is great. I don't know really anything about the Vigilante spin off, but I think adding its canon sounds like a good idea.

Rule number one about writing: if it makes you happy and it still fits in canon, add it. If you wanna write a story that you don't think many people will like, or that is a niche opinion and audience, but you love the concept, write it. This is something I have to remind myself a ton as well. You write for You.

Can't wait to hear more of this story! Keep it up!

Don’t cry don’t cry don’t cry *tear drop falls* GOSH DANG IT

Before he became completely single minded.

Much as I might enjoy seeing the Naruhata Vigilante's integrated into this story (any opportunity for another joke about "The Kruller" - or is it "The Hauler"), I'm not it it would be wise. You've already introduced elements which don't conform with the canon timeline - if Izuku just turned eight than this is more than six years before he first meets All Might in canon, which puts it before his first battle with All For One. While it isn't clear exactly when the Vigilante timeline begins, it's generally considered to not start until after that battle (since when Tsukauchi first meets Toshinori Yagi, All Might is already working under a time limit due to his injury). In fact if you were to strictly follow the Vigilante timeline then Tsukiachi shouldn't have been accompanied by Yagi when speaking with Inko in the previous chapter because in that timeline they wouldn't have yet met.

I tend to think that Izuku's presence might have helped to stabilize Chizome at least a little after Stendahl's battle with Knuckleduster (although I suppose Izuku running away beforehand could help to push him closer to that edge that he fell over after his defeat). However Izuku were to run away then I can't seen him being able to hang around anywhere near Naruhata without attracting the attention of "That Creepy Guy" or a certain underground hero (and heaven help Izuku if he attracts the attention of Aizawa's friend and former sempai, Nemuri Kayama).

I really do hope Izuku gets to go to his mom when his training is finally complete. I mean, will he be able to go to hero school?

Love this so much, it is a Unique take on a Vigilante spin-off.

dew it

Thanks for the hard work love the story _

Holy shit!

This fic is absolutely great! And honestly the chapters aren’t boring cause they help extend the plot and are important for character development.

Also way to go on accurately depicting emotional abuse and toxic co-dependent relationships.

I wonder where this is going next? Maybe poor Deku is forced to kill someone? If you don’t have any ideas maybe it would be a Humbart Humbart situation where Deku is allowed to go to UA but is kept on a strict leash but his love of Uraraka and his friends help him break free? Then there’s the fight between Endeavor and Stain that you seem to be leading up to hopefully! Or perhaps Inko recognizes her son but due to Stain’s conditioning he says he doesn’t know her? So many possibilities!

Great chapter :D

I'd wager once the training begins Izuku will go at it whole hog to hopefully become skilled enough to escape.

These chapters are killing me here. My heart hurts. Call a doctor plz