| Reviews for Dance of Serpents |
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  Guest chapter 7 . 7/19 More soon please |
 Travek chapter 1 . 7/17 This has a pretty cliche start. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/7 can you add voldemort daughter Delphini it will be awesome to see delphini in the story. |
| SPECIALGUY chapter 1 . 6/30 As a first chapter review I can't say too much about the setup chapter but I do have to ask what is going on with the capitalization of words in your story... There doesn't seem to be any rhyme or reason to it in certain areas. |
| RandoFox chapter 1 . 6/25 There's a number of typos in the first chapter alone, make sure to check your chapter's before you post them more often and maybe get a beta. |
| Flamingp0tat0 chapter 6 . 6/22 Why did you suddenly decide to make this fic a harem? Is there any other reason other than giving the sheep what they want? Or did you think up a plot that you think is better and more interesting which needs a harem? I'm genuinely curious. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/20 Harry Potter & the Strawman Argument |
| Guest chapter 7 . 6/6 Great story |
| ColdFang chapter 7 . 6/6 Very Interesting. Looking forward to the next installment! |
| impactor chapter 7 . 6/2 Awesome can't wait for more. |
| DipstickMadden chapter 7 . 5/25 More please |
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/22 No harem |
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/20 will you add hagrid to the story. |
| IAmOutOfIdeas chapter 7 . 5/17 This could be a good story... but holy fucking shit, you NEED a beta. Your spelling is ABYSMAL. I don’t mean to be rude, and I could definitely say this nicer, but I fear I wouldn’t get my point across otherwise. To say that there were more misspelled words than correctly spelled ones would BARELY be an exaggeration, there were that many errors. You were terrible inconsistent with the spelling of the characters’ names as well. I really hate being this rude, but this needs to be said. Spellcheck is a thing, y’know. The only valid excuse for the sheer amount of spelling errors is if you’re dyslexic. If you’re dyslexic, disregard every part of my review other than the part saying get a beta. Again, while I could say this all nicely, sometimes a person needs a bit of tough love to convince them to fix their problems. I have nothing but respect for your ability to write, as I’m definitely enjoying the story, but there really is very little reason for there to be so many spelling errors. TL;DR GET A BETA |
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/14 Unicorn already exist in skagos. Idk why she so surprised. |
