So i was rereading (I know you've been gone a long time :( ) But The one he talked to for the grail was not God but Alaya, at least it was for Arturia, so it would make sense it'd be the same for the male counterpart. In exchange for a chance at the grail, she would become a counter guardian. Also God has nothing to do with heroic spirits as you get that by being super fuckin famous (essentially) but i can understand if Arthur might of thought that as the real mythology has Arthur as faithful to Christianity. Though Merlin should know otherwise :P.

A decent and interesting story. Shame its abandoned.

You should have kept the girl Mordred because it would have been better when they met each other because they look like their father-son counterparts but it's not them.

Arthur isn't English. He's a Briton, the inhabitants of England about 600-700 years before the English.

Saber of Red Mordred would have been interesting, meeting Prototype Arthur and realizing both that this isn't her father and also is.

Why do writers always do this? If you want multiple cross-over characters rather than just the one -you promised and set up throughout the story- then make it clear from the start. Put it in the synopsis, show them crossing over in the first few chapters as well. What you've done here is derail your story from the promises you made in the first half, and it makes it completely unreadable for a part of your readers. It's just bad writing.

This is a tremendously fun story.

And man, that Arthur. Raising all those harem flags.

Vengeful Soldier, would it be alright for us to talk in a PM?

I always love reading a story about a specific insert. You read the resume it seems promising, then the story is well written and promising but always there has to be other that pop out of nowhere and it always seems to hurt the story...

I almost forgot about this story, but I've read it all again, and it's still just as impressive and beautiful of a read! I'm really interested in Merlin's sort of "prophecy" that Arthur must travel to Essos to get an army. Dany, is that you in the distance? Anyways, I hope you haven't abandoned this story, I love the concept!

Good story with a original concept i really like it

I wonder which way you are going with mordred, incest between Arthur and Morgan like in the arthurian legends or a homunculus like apocrypha Mordred

Cool idea and I liked the notion of Tyrion as Mordreds master given daddy issues. also liked tyrion not being a mage since it works well to prevent mordred from drelailing the plot too much and tyrion has his own solutions for providing prana and that's his whoring

I was gona say I really want this Arthur to have a multi pairing but make sure the women he's with are worth reading about. They dont have to be strong or anything but interesting or fun to read

Goota say i agree with your decisions and will trust you know what your doing with the servents and plot

Really don't want there to be a grail war and mroe servants. Itd be cool of Semly swore loyalty to Arthur and wasnt the last best swordsman called arthur?