This is heartwarming in my opinion. I look forward to seeing this progress. Even if I fear what will happen when Tabris arrives... or Bardiel...

This is a great story, I love reading it. Keep it up! I look forward to read what you write!

Woo Update!

Needs more "screams geometrically"

Very good chapter. Ramiel is really multifunctional. She can even be used as an harpoon. I wonder if she can make toast using the particle beam.

My reply to your PM will follow soon, when I have news on her condition.

Anyway, if you need help with the german for Asuka, I’ll gladly lend a hand.

Sorry for not reviewing recently. My grandma broke an arm, at her age that’s quite serious so I wasn’t in the mood.

Anyway, this story is rapidly climbing my list of favorites on this site. The ‘incident’ with Ramiel is in my eyes a case of Chekhovs Gun and will make a return. Until then it is nice to see their relationship grow.

As far as I know, this is a very good story! Please don't abandon it like the others do, this one is truly unique and deserves to be finished till the End of Evangelion!
I am proud of this ascended meme.

I would recommend reading over before posting. Fourth not forth

still way too many exclamations, and Shinji is a bit ooc. unless his background is different, its hard to have a less self depreciatng Shinji. otherwise, a good read, just needs some polish.

less exclamation points. you can make a point with a period. save exclamation points for, well, exclamations. interesting start though.

That’s some good story here! I’ve found it because Ramiel is my favorite angel and I wanted to look if someone had written anything about this majestic octahedron. And now I want more! I hope it will be continued, there is too few angel-centric stories, on top of that - an angel protagonist with some interesting plot twists and not “just because”? Sign me up!
On critical side, there isn’t much to say but I’d point out too many of exclamation marks in some parts of text. Looks kinda unnatural if you ask me, but hey, everyone and everything has a room for improvement, and this story definitely has a potential overcoming that small flaw! As I’ve said before, I’m gladly appreciate it and waiting for new chapters.

I hereby predict, that Shinji is going to die by embarrassment because of Misato. Jokes aside, to see that NERV went with “she ain’t threatening us so she ain’t a problem” is reassuring and concerning at the same time. I wonder what ‘your’ Gendo is scheming. In other news, you misspelled Angel as Angle sometimes (which is one those mistakes no program will highlight and can be over read easily). Other than that I didn’t find any mistakes. Keep up the good work.

Ouch. Just ouch. Well written chapter and all that, but damn. Poor Rami(el). And poor Shinji.

Love the story but I feel bad for Jadel.

I like it. Though I fear the ‚day‘ that Rami is discovered.