Chapter 2

Hi

The second chapter was a great continuation. Now that they have graduation, Kim and Ron have big hopes and dreams.

And Ron proposes to Kim, wow? I share the sentiment that it’s a bit soon. But while they are young, they are committed to each other and can probably make a relationship work out.

The part with their parents was good.

Now they are touring the country, planning to go to collage some time after their wedding.

The wedding scene was good, in a crazy sort of way. Well I guess Vegas is crazy.

The part where Ron and Kim happen to meet Drakken at the diner with other villains was great.

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Many aspects were great: great interactions, characterization, dialog, drama, humor, depth, complexity and scope.

The wholesome standards are high.

The language is clean.
Nothing is suggestively offensive.
No extreme violence or any other vile content.
Also, thanks for handling certain things very well done.

I hope you like this review. I also hope to get a reply from you. God bless

Data Seeker

Chapter 1

Hi

Great take on an extended version of the episode Graduation was very good.

The characterizations, interactions and vocabularies of the characters are great. Kim and Ron are excellent, full of depth, complexity and scope.

The part where Kim is grieving over her destroyed home was great. My family lost our home to a house fire a few years back, so I can relate to the pain of loss. Good job when describing the emotional loss Kim had when she took into account how her family’s house, and her pandaroo and other possessions got destroyed in the Alien invasion.

It’s great how Kim and Ron love each other, carry uncertainty of the future, but give each other great support. It felt very genuine, full of depth, complexity and scope.

The part with Kim staying at the Stoppable house while her family stays at a hotel was good, nicely written and flowed wel.

The reference to the Dweeps destroying Barkin’s car and that they didn’t get into a lot of trouble was good.

The part with Kim and Ron doing things together was good, and that they weren’t naughty was good.

The parts with them considering collage and a place to stay was good.

Nice bit with Ron getting a royal check.

Nice bit with Ron asking Kim to marry him.

And this chapter ends with them kissing was good.

This is what I think of the wholesome standards.

The language is clean.
Nothing is suggestively offensive.
No extreme violence or any other vile content.
I am dubious about how you said something. Can I elaborate?

I hope you like this review. God bless

Data Seeker

Awesome story! Seriously!

Not a bad first fic, I’ll have to check out the rest of your series now. Nothing like a light hearted and sappy K/R story to make one feel all warm and fuzzy.
But I will say this, nothing wrong with getting married in Vegas. Where else can you have the bachelor/bachelorette party, rehearsal dinner, ceremony, reception, and honey moon while entertaining the guest.

So Kim and Ron finally managed to tie the knot in Vegas...I do hope that there was no alcohol involved. XD

And still we don't know about Drakken's blue-skin origin! XD

Its interesting that right towards the end Kim and Ron seemed to have almost a normal life especially after talking to Drakken.

Heh heh, go figure that we still wouldn't find out why his skin is blue, XD.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

Getting married, even Elvis-style, cuts through anguish from Papa Possible...for a while.

Nice coffee stop with some of the old gang of villains, they're gonna need the caffeine...to charge them up.

CB73

Kim studying a little business, a little physical trainer stuff to be an owner/operator/Sensei of a dojo (or even a chain) could be interesting. The worldwide sight seeing tour does get then away from the tweebs...

Thanks, jimmy

I think Kim would be the one to pick Ron in bride style

The K/R relationship was sweet every step of the way and the future sure looks bright for them.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.