You have made me incredibly intrigued and very desperate for more! I love the way Dazai is written in this story and the OC you have worked into his path. Keep up the good work

Whaaaaat the fuuuu?
Will wait for next chapter!

This is great! I’ve noticed one semi-consistent (as far as I remember) error, though. For example:

“I’m fine, Dazai.” Tanizaki wheezed. “Go.”

Isn’t quite correct and could be either:

“I’m fine, Dazai,” Tanizaki wheezed. “Go.”

Or, if he doesn’t stop to pause after saying Dazai’s name:

“I’m fine, Dazai,” Tanizaki wheezed, “go.”

I hope this helps! This is not meant to be flame-like in anyway, I truly like this story and see potential in it! I hope the next update comes out soon!

Oh wow this is great! Can't wait for the next chapter! v

well, being trapped in a bus isn't so bad if this is the outcome, am i right ;) ? nice work, i'm very curious where this is going.
bye :)

great idea :D:D:D

hey, as far as i read, it's a great idea :) who is that child? i'm very curious. see you ;)