Reviews for Jasmine
InsanityIsClarity chapter 1 . 5/26/2019
This is amazing, I love your summaries!
s.m.e.catfish chapter 1 . 7/7/2018
I look forward to seeing more! I always have wondered what the show would be like if zuko didn't case the gaang but instead lead a "normal" life with his uncle. would they still practice firebending but in secret? would the gaang ever meet zuko? and how? Would Iroh take a more active stance against the war with the whitelotus? And if zuko finds inner harmony could he generate lighting? And most importantly would their Tee shop be successful?
Guest chapter 1 . 6/9/2018
i"It's abuse, Iroh says, far angrier than Zuko has ever thought he could be, fury on his tongue and poison on his lips as he snarls, your father is dishonourable, he has no right..."/i
Oh my god, this hit me right in the feels. Very good opening!

i""You're right, Prince Zuko," Iroh lifts his own cup of tea to his lips, and when the cup comes down, he's considerably calmer, more normal, the Uncle that Zuko remembers. "I'm sorry. I should not condemn your father like this in front of you. You are hurting. Shall I call the physician?""/i
You really nailed Iroh's character- this is SO him, thinking of Zuko first, before himself.

i"Zuko's hands are shaking now. From what, he cannot tell. "Uncle!" His voice comes out far louder than he expects, a storm, a tidal wave, "Tell me!" His voice is loud, harsh, just like his father's. (That should make him proud. Instead, it just solidifies the sick, twisted feeling in his gut.)"/i
The poor child

i""Treason?" Iroh snorts, "What's he going to do, banish me?""/i
Damn, I love this

i"the childishness of those words sink into his skin like the burn on his eye."/i
Such a great description!

i"(It doesn't matter. Not when Iroh is by his side with calloused hands and a warm cup of tea. His father, his terrifying, immovable father, doesn't seem so significant at that moment, and Zuko cannot find himself to care if those thoughts sound treasonous. He has his uncle.)"/i
Beautiful!

As always, I loved your work!
BigEyesBigSmile chapter 1 . 6/7/2018
Also interesting...
IceFlake 77 chapter 1 . 6/7/2018
Can't wait to see where this story goes!
C-Lif3 chapter 1 . 6/4/2018
Very, very nice, if a bit short.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/4/2018
Interesting. I look forward to more.
Gothic girl chapter 1 . 6/3/2018
Nice start on the first chapter I can't wait to see where this story will be going.