Reviews for The Day That Made Gil Remember Them: One-Shot!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/5/2019
Awesome story. Please continue.
MonoSheep chapter 1 . 10/10/2018
I wished you continued on with the story since I wanted to see if Gil take the advise seriously since he had been stalk by the twins too long.
917brat chapter 1 . 6/22/2018
can you do a sequel to this were the twins actually get in trouble for this cause yeah that is way creepy poor Gil...didn't they erase his memory once when they had him trapped in that metal almost casket looking thing?
Austin chapter 1 . 6/3/2018
Ok that is a original idea like this of what a skeleton in the closest should be like.
Gil finds that mary and Susan test have been stalking him for god knows how long.
Have Gil really go all out on calling the police hell if he is like in a super serious demand the twins or johnny if his sisters say violated Gil in his sleep or unconscious.
Or better yet have Gil tear into Johnny for betraying his trust by giving some of Gil's stuff to his sisters like clothes, any item that Gil touch, his locks of hair, just anything of Gil related. To Gil bros don't betray other bros on helping stalkers gain what ever piece said other bros stuff.
Heck I bet if Gil is like say gonna propose to his girlfriend only it is continuously ruined by the twins as to them no woman shall lay claim to Gil except them. They will probably have plans on 'taking' care of any obstacles in their way to Gil.
I'm more worried if Gil does have a wife and kid how will Susan and Mary test react to that fact. Will they go fully insane or what on making no woman on earth dares to bear Gil's child but them.
Good luck on the next chapter chachingmel and hope it comes soon.
Plus hope you'll like the suggestions for this story to help you out.