Hello star eyes pendulum dragon. Some time ago I read your fic. The truth is, I gave her the chance just because Verity was in the fic.
It is a character that I have liked a lot since it came out in the movie and I think it deserves more prominence than being relieved to that, a character from the movie (I have introduced it in my own fic, although for the moment it has only made couple of cameos ... Soon that will change xD) Besides that being Shirona's daughter and having some problems with her mother gives a plus and more depth to the character ...
Now, let's go with the Review itself of your fic.
For starters, I like the theme of the rainbow hero in Ash, as well as his getting legendary to fight, but I have to say, that makes things too easy for Ash. And it's a small negative point, but there it is, after all. As I say, I like that Ash get legendary (I've always believed that at least one or two should be with her) but you should be able to give her battles to match.
In your fic we find an Ash with a team capable of destroying practically all the pokemon trainers that have been seen in the anime and the movies, perhaps removing the champions and some leader of the evil organizations. The thrill of a good battle is one of the few negative points that I can find. And not as you describe them, but you don't expect a defeat from Ash, unless he doesn't carry legendary ones, of course.
Another point is that you have given Ash several new pokemon. That is very good and I like it, but give them prominence, as well as character, so that they call the reader more, that they remember that they are there. (I am waiting for a Dragonite for Ash xD ... And a Lucario, as we are).
Ash and Verity's relationship, as well as friendship with Sorrel, seem to me to be well taken, especially in the context in which you have brought them together again. Maybe Ash and Verity's relationship was a bit rushed (They already had feelings for each other, but I think they should have taken a little longer to declare themselves) but otherwise it's fine with me. I also loved his reunion match, I think it is the match that I liked the most that you have related so far.
At this point, I have to ask, is it going to be a harem? For my part, I hope so, you have already given clues, with Bianca and the thoughts of Latios and Latias about her and Ash. If in the end they end up being a harem, I just hope it's not a harem just because. Let there be conflict between those affected and Ash before accepting that type of relationship. And I hope that Dawn is in the harem xD, it would be interesting that she was the first to enter after Verity, she will be able to have a good discussion between the two, and more now that you have put Verity as Dawn's rival in the contests. They can be played much more than a contest.
On the other hand, I want to ask you where we are going? The enemy at the height is what I lack in this story. I guess it still hasn't come out, but here a powerful villain, or a set of them, is missing.
It is the only thing missing.
Otherwise, I have enjoyed the fic so far and I hope you will keep updating soon.
Greetings and looking forward to your next chapter.

Are Verity and Sorrol coming back?

So what do you think of my idea? Give me your honest opinion about such an story idea.

Ya know what I hope? I hope the world finds out about Ash being a Rainbow Hero when he trips in the finals of the next league and the feather just falls out.

As i re read this story, i notice the paet where you have ash caught dragonair happen exactly like in the anime except where Team Rocket and Dragonair evolve. You are a wizard.

Really like the story so far, hope it gets an update soon.

Make vetor a good and Kairi Godfather

interesting chapter.
Verity is really an impressive coordinator.

By pacing, I meant that the story got a little rushed during their travels. The pace of the story was a little rushed, but that problem straightened itself out quickly.

Well done. May and Verity stated things on the left foot, but they manage to become not only friends. They are also rivals not only in Contests and but also for the affection of one Rainbow Hero. Although Verity is the official girlfriend, May also plans to win Ash's heart as well.

For a first time writing Contests it was okay.

Paul and Zoey together now that's unexpected.

Although I'm disappointed Zoey isn't being paired with Ash, that won't stop me from reading.

great chapter keep it up

Мне понравилась глава. Я чуть не прыгаю от радости, что вышла прода. Автор, желаю вам удачи, вдохновения и здоровья.:))))

Well done on this! Glad to see Verity and May getting along and are willing to help each other get better at Coordinating! Keep this up! You did fantastic on writing out the Contest! And I can guarantee that you’ll only get better the more you do it! Until then!

What about arc v?