Reviews for Morgan and the Milfs
Idea chapter 14 . 9/2
It's a shame that they fate as a story suck but you could improve if you make a serious story about Fates.

Imagine a Story where Morgan, Lucina, Owain, Severa, inigo, and etc/All legacy characters from Awakening was Summoned by Anaklos. but they are not the only one cuz every story has another side.. Begining with Future Robin from main Story... after Robin Killed The Two Grima... the robin that was possessed was Finally Freed From Grima influence.. However he ends up in Fates World After Corrin is Kidnapped.. The Queen of Hoshido Mikoto found him Future Robin unconscious on the Royal Garden..

Garon is alive and not dead and replaced . he is Victim of Ananklos Gradually possessing him . the only thing that stops full possession is the king's love for his children and Strong Will.

The friendship between Gunter and Garon will eventually be restored after Gunter Finds out That it was Ananklos that killed Gunter Village and Family.

Story based on relavation.. it's actually harder for corrin to convince both parties to work together despite decent proof after Purging Anaklos out of Garon which puts him in a Coma . both Nations continue to war with each other.. this gives Ananklos enough opportunity to break out of the seal within his Realm.. Taking adavantage. Anaklos along with his army attacked Both Nations... both nations are put on the defensive and now they need the help of The Other Tribes such as Ice tribe, and other Tribes. To fight against Undead army... trust must be built for The Yato to become Omega Yato.. But that alone will be enough Now that Corrin Father is at Full Power...

Hint Hint.. just look up the Dante obtaining Sin Devil Trigger on Youtube.

Kamui.
Guest chapter 14 . 9/1
Can you do a chapter for Corrin and Tiki? The theme is big-tittied dragons.
Unlimited Fic Works chapter 14 . 9/2
this was a great chapter and I'll be honest, I have a feeling I know the identity of Kana's father...
ARSLOTHES chapter 14 . 9/1
Now I’m sorta waiting for Morgan to fuck Severa since it seems she’s in denial
sithlord16 chapter 13 . 7/9
love the story so far, hope to see a new chapter soon.
honter11 chapter 1 . 6/2
You surpassed yourself with this chapter I like when they are long and more with Lemon please do not forget the story (The MILF and the Student) as I said in the previous comment of a previous story that Boruto discovered his father and the mother of Inojin having sex but that the young Uzumaki is not alone but that he is with Tsunade and that she teaches him about sex while they continue to see the two blondes in full action.
TegamiBachi25 chapter 12 . 3/20
Yes! You're back! And with this story too. I love it. It was a great chapter!
Bruh chapter 12 . 3/13
Can there be a lactation kink chapter with Morgan, Anna and Tiki? The merchant and Morgan play with Tiki’s big tits and her breast milk in a variety of ways.
Count Grishnackh chapter 11 . 9/29/2019
Enjoy your birthday, my dude. Otherwise this chapter was fuckin phenomenal, the work you put in definitely shows!

Also Tiki is one of my absolute favourites too! Probably my most favourite fire emblem character at that
Gentleman chapter 10 . 4/29/2019
You put so much effort into this it's astonishing. I'm sure the Tiki capture will be excellent. I really do hope that this story picks up in popularity because it deserves it.
Guest chapter 10 . 4/28/2019
Dang How is it that every chapter so far is better than the last. I can't give much critique as this chapter was nearly perfect. This story differently deserves to be way more popular than it currently is.

All I can say is keep up the good work and have a great day.
de-Morgana chapter 1 . 4/27/2019
weirdly enough, i cant wait for say'ri
Count Grishnackh chapter 10 . 4/27/2019
I was going to request Tiki since shes a first gen character, but then i thought to myself...We can we further than that.
Because what would be better than fucking dragon Jesus? Fucking Dragon God, of course. Besides we can all agree that having sex with Naga herself would be Morgan's greatest achievement
echomgs chapter 9 . 2/17/2019
Cool story, really looking forward to see Tiki. As for the three girls, I would choose Cherche.
TegamiBachi25 chapter 9 . 2/13/2019
Good chapter. I especially liked the part where nowi transformed into a dragon and the man shit himself in fear. He done fucked up. Can't wait to see what happens next. And look at Morgan, he gets her to join his harem. Lucky bastard.

Anyway, like I said, the chapter is great. But there is one thing with the story im have an issue with and that I feel sets this story back from being what it should be. It's nothing wrong with the characters or not, it's something related to the story: It's the lack of conflict. As of right now in this story, there seems to be no major conflict or what not. Now before you go and say that I didn't read the last chapter about escorting tiki, acting as representatives, and valm, but what I'm having trouble with is the length of the conflict. I feel as though after the conflict pertaining to valm is done and dealt with, everyone will go back to their lives. What happens next after? A mission that will just only take a couple of days... and then what?

And there's another issue I'm having with the plot: It pertains to Morgan and his harem. As much as I like seeing morgan getting all the ladies, I don't just want to see morgan seducing and fucking almost every chapter. I mean no offense, but almost every chapter is morgan just him making love with the female members of the shepards, or at least some part of the chapter is. I know that it's the main point of the story (as stated in the summary), but so is a conflict, and this story doesn't seem to have a major one so far. If you're planning to add one down the road: great. I hope it comes sooner than later. If you are willing to take suggestions, I do have a one for a huge and long lasting conflict that should last an arc:

A new mysterious unknown and deadly enemy (as big as a threat as grima or whatever other major villain in awakening) that the shepards must deal with. The origin of this enemy is unknown (can't really think of one, so you can play around with the origin and decide what he or she needs. Make one up), and with the shepards and other forces still recovering from grima, it forces them into battle once again.
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