love the story

Thank you! 333

When I saw that you updated this story, my heart filled with joy! This is my favorite story on here by far! I’m really happy to hear that you are determined to finish this because you really are my favorite author. I’m so excited that Henry came back, even though I knew from before he wouldn’t give up because he’s so brave. I didn’t think things could possibly get more intense, but I was wrong. Minyak took over ANOTHER city? That’s crazy! Things are really starting to heat up and the alliance is getting into shape again. I love how you connected this story with the black lives matter movement because it really makes sense in the times right now. You don’t know how much I love this story, it’s absolutely amazing! Thank you for updating, it really made my week. I hope you can update soon!

Imagine how happy I was when I saw the notification that Invasion updated.

Spoiler alert: jumping-with-joy happy.

This fic is one of my faves and I'm glad it'll have an ending, a HAPPY ENDING, HELL YES!

Also, go Henry! I'm glad he came back :3

We-e-ell, welcome back, my friend! It's good to see you again. It's been a while. And don't feel too bad, I've probably been away from my own page almost as long as you have. One day at a time. I will be eagerly awaiting your next chapter. Things are starting to turn up. Stay healthy and safe!
-Imagigirl20

Loved it I hope you will continue to write the next chaptern

You can't silence us.
Damn.
Damn damn damn
Okay I actually loved how you got Piper all involved in this graffiti thing.
Scratch that not only do I enjoy Piper being involved in it, but I love the whole graffiti thing. Like you just said, it's a declaration of war that your enemies have to acknowledge.
This whole story is beautiful. You've woven so much intrigue and depth in just a few chapters, and I am sincerely on the edge of my seat waiting for an update.
CAN"T WAIT FOR UPDATES
-39addict101

Okay this might have been the smartest move on the part of the Alliance.
Minyak probably sees Boom Brothers and Company as the biggest idiots on the planet and so he wont suspect anyone of anything.
I LOVE WHERE THIS IS GOING STUFF IS STARTING TO TURN
Sort of
because Captain Man...
ARGH RAY NOOOO

AWWW I thought it was sooo cute when Henry liked Charlotte running her fingers through his hair.
Also it was a nice touch to see Henry so broken. Sometimes I think all of our "hero" characters never seem to break. They get discouraged yet, but we hate to break them. But I loved how breaking him gave us a new look at Henry.
I literally love this story.
I think I started reading this last year and I got busy, senior year and all, but now here I am, once again reading this amazing work.
I just saw that this hasn't been updated since December of 2019... and I guess I'm just asking that... maybe you could update this please because this is amazing and I don't want to forget what I'm reading hahahaha

NOOOOO WHAT IS GOING ON CAPTAIN MAN SHOULD BE KICKING MINYAK IN THE BALLS NOT HELPING HIM
okay okay but if Captain man is out of the town can Henry take back Swellview?

WAIT WHAT HOW DID HE...
SON OF A BAPTIST PREACHER NO RAY IS SUPPOSED TO SAVE THEMMMM NOT KILL THEM WHAT WHAT WHAT WHAT

Things are really heating up.
Why did Minyak let Henry go? Why didn't he kill him and announce to everyone that Kid Danger is dead? Does he have an ulterior motive?
WHAT IS GOING ONNNNN
also I really liked how you're including the younger kids in here, it gives the story a well-rounded appearance, rather than focusing on just the characters and leaving plot inconsistencies

I liked the restfulness of this chapter, and it was good to see everyone getting along.
However, it was a little choppy with all the ellipses or stars or linebreakers haha, whatever you want to call them. Perhaps try finding a way to combine it all into one smooth flowing scene?

this chapter was a little rushed... you probably could have slowed it down a bit, telling more about what was going on while Althea and Mark worked, but I still liked it.
I really like the tension between Henry's gang and the Wall Dogs.
This is a really well rounded story and I'm very happy with it.

What do you mean this wasn't exciting? I loved this... I really liked how it filled out Veronica's character... this is amazing.