Loved it!

Exclamation marks were originally called the "note of admiration." They are still, to this day, used to express excitement. They are also used to express surprise, astonishment, or any other such strong emotion. Any exclamatory sentence can be properly followed by an exclamation mark, to add additional emphasis.

They rarely, but on occasion signified shouting or anger, this is a modern interpretation of the only use for a single exclamation mark!

Okay, rant over xx Alexis

Okay so that bit above is from your bio...my problem is you use an exclamation point even when a character is 'mumbling'. By your definition on your bio you are using incorrect punctuation.

Wasn't Emmett and Rosalie there at peters last time you mentioned them? What is happening with them? Would like to see them meet and see what happens ?

Really good story!

Beautiful ending. Thanks so much for sharing. Gosh it doesn't feel that long ago that the Rocky Horror Picture Show was released. I remember it well. Lol. I can picture Aro's ass in that corset with Bella humming the song quietly and the other three cracking up. Such a good read. I think your Writing is exceptional and you have an awesome wicked sense of humor and imagination. Thank you again for sharing.

Really enjoyed reading this one.
Such a good read.
Looking forward to the next chapter.

Hehehe...I loved this one as well. Jasper so romantic and Bella the ever dangerous human -vampire...Awesome hon as always...till next time...bigg huggs. Peggy

"I'm just a sweet transvestite from, transexual transylllvaniaaaaaa" one of my all time favorites as well! don't like the new made for TV version though. interesting idea for Carlisle, his having a gift and using it to manipulate everyone. I feel bad for Edward now, he died for no reason. though I tend to think that Alice likely didn't have to be manipulated at all. she seems the type to be greedy enough for power to go along willingly.

I read this a while ago but have no idea why I didn't comment or favorite it! I really love the Kill Bill vibe on this, buh bye Edward and Alice. good riddance

This was lovely! I had to look for the song,it send me into a laughing fit!I really enjoy it! Great story! As always!

Thanks for sharing this with us!

i love The Rocky Horror Picture Show ... i watch it every halloween

Awesome!

this was a good chapter I thought. and a good story line. I liked the way Bella got her revenge on everyone of them that wronged her right. Also the way Jasper and Bella found each other once again and became very happy together. Thank you for sharing this short story with us.

Thank you for such a terrific ending to this story you had started. Cannot wait to see what you do next!