Reviews for Syncope
AprilAlice chapter 7 . 7/23
Thank you for this beautiful story. I cried. Sasuke's love for Sakura is so heartfelt. Your writing is incredible. I also like how you wrote Kakashi being considerate of Shizune's wellbeing. Sending Love.
AprilAlice chapter 6 . 7/23
I'm crying oh my god T.T
konekorashii chapter 7 . 7/17
It's been a while since I cried for a fanficition. It was a lovely read, thank you!

It was short and very sweet, bringing out all sorts of emotion and drama. The flow of the story was great with no wasted words and everything tied up nicely towards the end. Everyone was very in-character, which I really appreciated. My heart went out to Sasuke more than anything - poor thing doesn't deserve to lose anyone else :/ I liked how you portrayed Karin. It felt very realistic and made her easy to relate to. It's rare for her characterisation to be done well I feel, without her coming off as shallow or annoying. I liked how you even gave Shizune a substantial role and the slight Kakashi/Shizune part was fun to read too :D

If I had to give some criticism, it would be that I would have liked a bit more drama and description writing of emotions but that's just me since I love angst :P Overall, great job, will definitely read your other work!
kawaii248 chapter 7 . 4/17
Awesome idea for a fic! Sasuke’s emotions in chapter three are so raw and heartbreaking. It must be utterly heartbreaking learning to deal with a spouses’ terminal illness. You touch on the pain, guilt and insecurities of both sides is just brilliantly. Thank you for sharing!
felina12 chapter 7 . 4/11
This story was absolutely beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing this. I was enraptured from start to finish and I was so impressed by your writing style and the way you described everyone's reactions and interactions. Thanks again, and I hope you are keeping safe and healthy during these troubling times. Lots of love and support, Felina XD.
iminnerdvana chapter 7 . 4/5
Thank you for writing this! I loved this story so much. The bonds between Sasuke, Sakura and Sarada were depicted so beautifully. And Karin was such a badass here. Also, the scene where Sasuke cried while holding Sakura in the hospital bed made me tear up.
SasukeSakura23 chapter 7 . 4/4
Ahhhhh this was so overwhelming ️
SasukeSakura23 chapter 6 . 4/4
I never felt so much love for Karin
CharlieSlayer chapter 7 . 2/20
This was so good. Made me cry lol I felt the pain.
Great work!
cherryheads chapter 7 . 12/24/2019
lovely lovely! I was positive this was going to have sad ending but you surprised me! oh i love this.
chlorampattycol chapter 7 . 11/12/2019
it was a Beautiful story, very well written! I like the plot and the interactions between the Uchiha family and K I was expecting Sarada's sharingan be activated as triggered by her mother's death. And shouldn't Tsunade rush home knowing Sakura is dying? Anyways, it was a great story over all
leonebrion chapter 7 . 10/31/2019
That ending was fucked up in a way. The overall theme was amazing though. Sasuke is such a good person. Great father, great husband.
leonebrion chapter 6 . 10/31/2019
You just had to write like this...amazing. :'(
leonebrion chapter 5 . 10/31/2019
Great chapter!
leonebrion chapter 4 . 10/31/2019
Oh man, this is such a great story. The last line was so concise but so powerful.
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