Reviews for Percy Jackson: Helper of Olympus
Max Woodson chapter 11 . 7/27
Fuck the hate comments please continue this wonderful story
Rickcathyfangirl666 chapter 1 . 6/10
Bro pls pls PLS keep the story going. Even if you say you're gonna waste our time, we still hope you will continue. Yeah, so if you can, PLS UPDATE!
Random Person chapter 4 . 6/5
About the Greek thing, wisdom in Greek is Sigma Omicron Phi Iota Alpha, (sorry, I don't have a Greek keyboard, those are the names of the letters) which can be translated two ways:
1) "Sophia" which is more commonly used as a name, but I prefer it because I think of Phi as having a "ph" sound, not the letter "F".
2) "Sofia", the way you did it, which isn't technically wrong, and I have nothing against it, but Phi has a slightly softer sound than F.
you r a shit chapter 11 . 5/29
fuck u u little cunt you ruined al egandery Storie
Guest chapter 11 . 4/30
You prolly won’t read this, but I really enjoyed your story. I think there’s a lot of interesting ideas you presented with this. I kinda wished we got to see Percy and Harry interact more but I understand it was more focused on Percy and Fleur. So all in all I think you had some really fun and enjoyable ideas and thanks for sharing!
Demi wizard chapter 1 . 4/19
You should live in tartarus.
Guest chapter 11 . 4/5
Please write more this is no joke please write more pretty pls with a cherry on top
Damkid chapter 11 . 12/27/2019
a great book has a lot of hater for they don't have a n imagination tho I will say pls keep going
Guest chapter 11 . 1/22/2019
Good story hope you come back and update
Black Raven0517 chapter 11 . 1/19/2019
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY I can't go on the story stopped noooooooooooooooooooooo:(
ThePhengophobicGamer chapter 1 . 9/5/2018
While this is an interesting summary, I couldn't get even through the first two chapters. First, you started off way too strong. You went and loaded Percy with power, which while not always bad, seems really offputting right out the gate.
Then you just rip Percy and Annabeth apart with little to no reason why. I've seen several other stories that do it much better, either by manipulating one or the other or for several other reasons. Here, Annabeth just all of a sudden thinks Percy sucks or something. Just as offputting.
Then, skipping over the singing bit, which was cheesy, but could be forgiven, We find out that Sally is a witch, Paul is a wizard, and Percy is supposed to be a wizard. That's what lost me, as there is no way in hell he can be a wizard and have anything make sense. If Percy is a wizard, why isn't he an obscurial right now? He's used no magic in his life, only his own godly powers. It could be explained that his godly powers balance out what would make him an obscurial, if it were written that way, but the fact tat Percy never went to any magical school shoots that down for the most part. There is no way Sally wouldn't have told Percy he was a wizard and sent him off to a school, because to here, Percy would have become an obscurial if he didn't learn about his magic.
Overall, I do find the scenario interesting, but you've just thrown everything together, and hope it would stick, which are not stories I like to read most of the time.
Really, I only see a few minor tweaks so far that would make this story something worth reading to me. For one, drag the first chapter out just abit. Make Percy Hestia's champion in the first chapter. Have him do a few tasks for her before becoming Olymus' champion, maybe. It could be argued that winning two wars is proof enough, then just make him Olymus' champion, not a single god's first.
Then you want to have something happen during those first few chapters to give Annabeth a reason to break up with Percy.
Then the last and easiest change I know of would be making Percy not a wizard. If Hecate wants his help, she can easily give him her blessing, letting him do magic. It's been done before, but it's pretty straightforward and it works. If you want him to be connected to the magical world, make Sally a squib, giving her a connection, but neither of them were born with magic.
Lycaon1096 chapter 11 . 9/3/2018
this is a great story keep up the good work
Guest chapter 11 . 9/1/2018
Hate comments? I really like your story. Hope to see an actual update soon :)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/27/2018
Horrible beginning, middle, and end
No one chapter 1 . 8/26/2018
I hate you because you made random people gods
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