I definitely wouldn't mind this being canon. For one, I love badass ruthless characters. And, for another, being a revolutionary would reunite her with her dad! Who was the boy with her? Sabo?
And I don't know the kindom! The only One Piece kingdoms I can think of off the top of my head are Goa, Alabasta, Dressrosa, and Sakura/Drum but none of them really seem to fit the criteria for this? Pls tell me

you know this is good. just arrived from the original, and i just want to say that i lov this. Keep up the amazing work you do xD

Hooo looks neat. What kind of devil fruit was that?
And was that boy Ace?

Thank so much for writing such an amazing scene! Now I can't stop asking myself what may have happened for S!Luffy to take this path! Will the "Lost Children" appear in the main story? Because I would love to see what and who they are...
Lastly, thank you so much for sharing your writing here and sorry for my poor English!

Well damn I liked this