Continue please

Interesting story, gotta admit I was hoping Hinata disappearing at the same time had me hoping she was getting her chance with Naruto. Thanks for sharing

that was good keep the chapters coming

Well, this was interesting whilst it lasted, till the fourth chapter where the thinly-veiled Sasuke and Sakura bash-fest took control. (Typical and too predictable by now, but it's Humour, goys!) The rest wasn't so bad. Some lines were chuckle-worthy, and the rest made me smile; but that's just about it. The humour isn't novel or interesting; it's mostly situational in a very tame and crude sort of way—the kind you would expect in an average Naruto fan-fiction; however, it isn't necessarily a bad thing, because I had a pretty decent time with this. I basically got what I'd anticipated.

That aside, the grammar's pretty bad. I'll say the same for structure of the chapters. The chapters look, for want of a better word, down-right ugly, with bits and pieces of words, phrases, and subordinate sentences thrown around willy-nilly as full sentences. There's a general rule of thumb here, and it goes something like this: "use them sparingly, very sparingly." No, really, that's not a good look (It isn't), no matter how many times your fan-fiction "bros" tell you that it's "totes" cool to do this as some sort of "inner-rebel's self-expression" where general grammatical rules are blown to smithereens—just because we can. Just look at your fifth chapter. I mean, come on!

If you refined your writing, there's some talent for Humour here. Your idea was interesting, but you never really went anywhere with it. Anyhow, good luck in your future endeavours.

Nice chapter. Like how tenten reacted to naruto losing an arm. Wonder if this will start the 4th war. Can't wait to read more

That punchline. Dayum. Also, why yu no update your fics often no more?

I've never really written a review before, not even on some of the best works I've managed to find on this site, but ive felt it necessary to write this one. I hope this fic continues.

I re-read this from the beginning. :D
I love it still..

From the looks of this story, this will have a lot of twists and turns

Huh. Okay, this one I don't get. Narutoverse is one where you can literally rip out someone's eye, put it in your eye-socket, and have it work better than your original eye, with little to no medical assistance needed. And yet there are no options for an arm? Especially when Naruto is a jinchuriki? Shouldn't he be capable of regrowing one under certain circumstances? What am I missing?

I love the little Bijuu strategy and counter strategy part.

You like making Naruto lose an arm. So mean. Good chapter, a lot of bitter and very little sweet but not in an offputting way.

Great stuff update soon.

Fuck, you back in the writing game? Been following your stories longer then I've had an ff account . Love how dramatic your stories get without being a drama you know what I mean? Anyways take care of yourself .
~a long time fan of yours.

This is insanely interesting the only thing I'm not down on is Naruto getting with Sakura. I'm not anti-sakura but the bases of their relationship sounds terrible. I want him because of the attention I can't get from Sasuke. You've built the ground work for Tenten. I hope you go with that. Either way, I'm a fan.