| Reviews for Under the Broken Sun |
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   Roxy1313 chapter 1 . 7/17 Excellent story. Well written and an engaging read. |
| Suzy-Chapstick chapter 51 . 7/2 Excellent! |
| LillianBroderick chapter 51 . 3/7 Wonderful Thank you |
| LillianBroderick chapter 45 . 3/6 That’s better |
| LillianBroderick chapter 38 . 3/6 Damn |
| LillianBroderick chapter 33 . 3/6 Excellent chapter |
| LillianBroderick chapter 2 . 3/5 I am confused by her behaviour |
| Eh Bien chapter 51 . 2/15 Great story. Much of it was not only suspenseful, but harrowing, and you kept up the tension very well. The new direction, although it led pretty far afield, reconnected very smoothly with the original story. Nice work, well written and engrossing to the end. |
| Eh Bien chapter 13 . 2/14 I'm only up to Chapter 13, and had to pause and comment. I can't honestly say I'm "enjoying" the story, because it's pretty chilling, but your writing is very good, and your description of a rape victim seems right on target. I'm not sure how to judge it as Twilight fanfiction, but you write one hell of a horror story. |
| FireFlower77 chapter 48 . 1/27 here there is only Claire... but when edward heard things in the tummy he said i hear THEM. you mentioned two and at some other point as well... and it was clear it wasn't Bella... |
| Bevey99 chapter 51 . 12/30/2019 Wow, good read. I devoured this in 2 days. Loved all the canon / non-canon similarities to all the Twi books. Thanks so much for writing and sharing. |
| Sweetie7smiled chapter 51 . 12/27/2019 Neat story! Thanks for writing! |
| Sweetie7smiled chapter 34 . 12/27/2019 So much care gone into doing this right. Thank you for writing! |
| Sweetie7smiled chapter 23 . 12/27/2019 Belated though it is: Nice effort, Charlie. :) |
| Sweetie7smiled chapter 19 . 12/27/2019 Nice, Sam. I'm impressed. :) |
