| Reviews for Arrival of the Birds |
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   Louise Hess chapter 8 . 9/1 Thank you for sharing this story - enjoyed it very much |
| Louise Hess chapter 5 . 9/1 A very sweet chapter with Jane caring for Maura in the hospital |
| Kathy chapter 8 . 8/29 Your storey was wonderful! Congratulations for the June on the 12th Birthday, My well wishes are belated since it is Aug 30/2020 always enjoy finding people who share the same bday as myself |
| annabre94 chapter 8 . 9/20/2019 Perfect ending to a great story. You did such a great job with writing these two |
| nicolaruth27 chapter 7 . 1/2/2019 Also... SUCH a good title. Bravo for that, too. I am a huge nerd for a really good, catchy title. Creative, meaningful, brief, memorable... love it. |
| nicolaruth27 chapter 8 . 1/2/2019 Oh this was really really wonderful! You hooked me completely in the first chapter and though it is light on dialogue in parts I love your writing style. Awesome story. Glorious ending. So sweet. I thought maybe there were going to be more gifts along the way... like maybe a dress and some heels and then a surprise wedding tent setup somewhere over the horizon with guests waiting, but this was tremendous and hit me in all the feels! Thank you for sharing. It was a pleasure to read. |
| lisagayle713 chapter 8 . 11/20/2018 lovely story! thank you! |
| Mauraslover chapter 3 . 8/12/2018 laparoscopic kidney removal doesnt normally take as long as it does in your story. 2 - 2.5 hours is normally how long it takes. |
| Mauraslover chapter 5 . 7/29/2018 Maura should have asked Jane to do her bikini line. I can just imagine the look on Jane's face. Just as well they're in hospital because Jane would probably need a hospital bed. |
| Jupiter chapter 8 . 7/4/2018 A perfect ending to a beautiful story :) |
| Rain chapter 8 . 6/15/2018 Too short my friend! :) this was beautiful! |
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/14/2018 Nice ending to story. Thank you. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/13/2018 Happy birthday! I just loved this story and it had a sweet end. |
| ynot45 chapter 8 . 6/13/2018 JANE must have sold her own kidney to buy the matching set ? |
| malexfaith chapter 8 . 6/15/2018 Oh my gosh. The ending was perfect. great read. Thanks heaps for sharing |
