Just call in the Knights, let Berserker have a go fighting a pissed-off Vita

Excited for the Upcoming battle

Honestly tsab agents should not be getting involved in the grail war it is a political mess waiting to happen as the grail war is an independent magic system produced by a government and world that is not an administrative world so it is not under any obligation to follow the laws of the tsab and that means if the ages association manages to get into contact with the governing body of the administrative worlds it can hurt the image of the tsab quite badly as they will be seen as the bad guys for interfering with a sovereign planet and it will make other worlds worry if they will interfere in their worlds affairs on a whim

great work

But wouldn't it be obvious to Saber to begin with though?

I mean I think she was aware that the Britain she was fighting for was on it last legs from the end of civil war with Mordred and Arturia, at that time, knew she was dying right and that would be very bad for the kingdom to lose its king at that time as well? And with the country being weak, it would be easy pickings for conquerors who tried to take Britain before or those who haven't yet.

What I am trying to say is though, there is no way Saber doesn't know of WHAT WILL BE OF her kingdom's fate with these things in mind a bit BEFORE she made contract with Alaya.

Also, I don't think Nanoha would have argued with Arturia if she truly didn't have all of the facts. I would think she would investigate before making such a important argument.

Wow...This story underestimate Servants A LOT!

Expecting King Arthur, in any semblance of the historical origin, to be proud of modern Great Britain is like expecting a Native American to be proud of the US, or an Ainu person to be proud of Japan’s economy. “King Arthur” is generally agreed to have fought against the invading Anglo-Saxons, who, decades after the peace brought by King Arthur/his historical counterparts, ultimately conquered most of the Celtic-Roman Britons. And then centuries later, England was conquered by the French Duke of Normandy, William the Conquerer. In short, King Arthur and Camelot are removed from modern England by at least two degrees of separation.

Illya is half human- homunculus, German-Japanese Legal Loli. A perfect friend for Caro and Vita who suffers the same growth deficiency.
I wonder Midchildia will be able to magic surgery fix Illya, most likely I think. (Well considering they were able to heal Nanoha after the deadly situation)

great work

For all intent, Saber is emotionally unstable after Camlann. Combined with her inability to accept losses, convincing her going to be a very long investment. I know this is a story that tries to be idealistic, but for the duration of the war, I don't it will be feasible to convince Saber to give up on that wish. I don't know, but to leave Saber in limbo over her decision is a better take for her.

I liked the Kirei and Gilgamesh interaction.
Sometimes Gil is just so likeable, and the way you write him really makes me like him.
Anyway, please keep up the great work!

Um, I think Saber's actual wish is to save her KINGDOM(not NATION) of Britain, her subjects she failed under her care from the fate she feels she helped create? Regardless of how the nation Britain is now?

This chapter was quite the trip, if there is something I love of Crossovers is characters interacting with each other. And this was full of it. Not to mention the how in line with the canon everyone acts.

Also, I hope there is a continuation of this in some shape or form. As I really want to see Setanta troll Section 6, because let's be honest, Cu is best Doggo and can get away with it!

Disclaimer: This review is for chapter _18_, posted like this because fanfiction still does not allow editing reviews.

About Britain: Artoria's Britain is not the same as the nation that has emerged in its place. She ruled over Britons and fought against various Germanic invaders. After her time, said Germanic tribes successfully settled in the British isles and formed the Anglo-Saxon culture that is the basis of what we know as British culture today. Later still, Norman invaders came and conquered the anglo-saxons, forming a new ruling class and establishing what we recognize as the nation of England.

If Artoria were told to be proud of "her" nation's achievements in becoming a global superpower, she should be very rightly pissed off as you are basically telling her to celebrate the glory of her people's conquerors. As much as the majority of Nanoha's argument is sound, the specific part about Britain going on to become a global superpower is a major faux pass. If you are interested, read up on Anglo-Saxon settlement of Britain. The majority of what Artoria would call Britain, in blood and in culture, is lost in that transition.

About Britain: Artoria's Britain is not the same as the nation that has emerged in its place. She ruled over britons and fought against various Germanic invaders. After her time, the