| Reviews for Knightfall |
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Guest chapter 6 . 2/3 It’s been almost 2 years bro! |
Man285 chapter 6 . 10/23/2019 Intres4 |
CrazyOlBen chapter 6 . 8/20/2019 Love the story, but it seems like it's not being updated and added to anymore... Hope that you'll eventually come back to it, would be greatly happy to see more! |
Anibalssj chapter 3 . 8/3/2019 Warning for everyone starting to read thisRevan, who's supposedly Grey, molests bastilla (and somehow she, uh.. "enjoys it a little bit"? Wtf) I'm out |
Anibalssj chapter 2 . 8/3/2019 Welp, not my kind of Revan :p while I see him snapping necks left and right and killing without a second thought (but not mindlessly), I don't see him forcefully kissing bastila or been so blunt Same with her, I see her rejecting him much strongly, specially just after getting captured and basically stripped naked |
Anibalssj chapter 1 . 8/3/2019 Looking forward to reading this. One thing I noticed is that you use dialogue to make exposition, and that makes the character seems like they talk too much, specially for raven who loses a lot of his mysterious aura. |
Revan3363 chapter 6 . 5/18/2019 Great story so far can't wait for more keep up the good work :) |
I-Nex-I chapter 6 . 4/30/2019 Really like this so far. I also like that Bastila isn’t completely swayed to him. It makes sense that she would have doubts, but not that she would suddenly abandon everything she ever knew, and you’ve done a good job of balancing that line I think. I hope we eventually see the Jedi Council’s point of view as well, as I hope you don’t make them these wholly awful people, and instead just misguided. I’m also not sure why you put Jaden Korr in this story, I thought that was an odd choice. It doesn’t seem like he has much impact on it, so it’s not a huge problem though. I hope you have plans to continue this! |
thewookie1 chapter 6 . 12/1/2018 Very interesting fanfic, hope to see it updated soon |
sniperman1202 chapter 6 . 10/21/2018 Hope you update this soon it one of the best ones I've read. Reminds me of one from a while ago where Revan killed malak as well. Hope to see it updated :) |
Ehh chapter 6 . 10/14/2018 Grammar went from good to pure trash again. What the fuck happened? |
Ataxius chapter 1 . 9/16/2018 "with many people remembering the holocaust the Sith committed on their ancestors", interesting statement, considering that it was the Republic who committed genocide. Did you purposefully get that backwards to demonstrate the ignorance of the average Republic Citizen? |
te.nellis chapter 6 . 9/5/2018 Awesome! Keep it up! Loved it! |
te.nellis chapter 5 . 9/5/2018 Excellent. Keep it up! |
te.nellis chapter 4 . 9/4/2018 Awesome! Keep it up! Loved it! |