This is so far an entertaining story. While I don’t know NCIS very well, you got the Star Trek character’s personalities down pat.

I do hope you continue this story at some point.

how can this story be COMPLETE?
ABANDONED maybe but just barely started

Good start!

I never expected there to be another chapter of this! Thanks

I love Bones and the classic lines he uses while Tony is there getting examined.

I love the premise, and the fact that the writing doesn’t make me wanna scoop my eyes out with a rusty spork helps too. More to come?

Complete? COMPLETE! are you outta your mind? This maybe one of the best first chapters I have ever seen, now write some more of this, please.

oh, c'mon. I just discover your amazing stories, and this is all I get of NCIS/Start Trek? My two favorite shows?

Where's Chapter 2 through 42? (for the answer to Life, The Universe and Everything)

Any chance this will be added to?

the sprouting of a germ of an idea. lots of potential here. looking forward to more.

cant wait for next chapter

Lol, great. This deserves the long story treatment where DiNozzo gets permanent vaccines against everything(perhaps including stupid directors).

Thank you for making me laugh.

Great start...so does Tony get a chance to get healed lungs and knee. Please continue you have the plot so tell the story.

Perfect! I'd love to read more of this...