This was so much better than what the show did in the season 10 premiere. I loved that in this, the team stuck together and Sam and Fallen refused to leave Kensi and Feels behind. That sort of teaminess is too rare on the show itself.

I also liked how you had them discuss their problems and working it out isn't easy. The show ended up glossing over these very real problems and I was happy to see this story explore this conversation. I also loved that Kensi realized what Feels was trying to say.

Kensi and Deeks maybe have come to some agreement about their future. They will marry and have children and Deeks can run his bar. Maybe This was a wonderful story by a writer who made it interesting. Not everyone can do what you do and you do it well. Thank you.

I had my doubts about Hidoko, I though she was dead. Now they have transport out. They will make it.

While Deeks may have the worst injuries, he has a hard head as Kensi is always telling him.

just love this.
if we don't get another chapter we at least need a followup story
please

re-reading some of your stuff...
this is outstanding
thank you

fantastic,
thank you

I’ve fiiinally been able to watch series 9 and whilst I mostly watch the show for Callen and Sam, I’ve got to say I really felt for Deeks in those last two episodes - it’s probably the most I’ve liked his character in the whole series! He was so spot on in his morals, and his relationship concerns... Anyway, I love what you’ve done here, it feels ‘real’. Great job.

Thank you for this wonderful story!

Oh, Hidoko is one of the better additions to the series and I sure hope she is alive indeed!

I'm worried about Deeks though. He seems to be in a very critical situation and I dont think he should be moved. But then again, there's no other choice...

Wow, great first chapter. We all need to know how they're doing and here it is, written in one other story.
Love your writing!

Hope this is what they’re gonna do on the show it’s brilliant and sooo densi

Nice story. This is how I picture the tv show handling it...

Oh my goodness that was actually perfect! I hope the show plays out as well as your story

I’m hoping this is how it goes on TV. I really like Kensi and Deeks as a couple. On the other hand, the job isn’t just what Kensi does but rather it is a huge portion of her identity. Deeks knew that going in so I think it is unfair to ask her to walk away because of his worries. If she were to quit I don’t think she would be happy. Your story handled everything nicely.