Are you coming back to this?

I thought severus head of the house at school. I don't think he can leave the school at night

Your story is so good! I hope you come back to it.

For some reason, I see Persephone in Rose and Hades in Snape. Rose's family disagrees about Severus like Persephone's mother to Hades in PJO and etc..

Good, and canon, even if Severus survives. I like it.

Thank you for this chapter. Absolutely loved it for a couple of reasons. It certainly is heartwarming, charming and subtly funny. However the most important reason for loving it is slightly different. In most fanfics writers are so very focused on the personal relationship between the characters, that they forget that these characters are supposed to have a life, a job even some achievements outside of their personal relationship. Certainly, a person like Snape would be mostly focused on how his significant other treats him if they pay attention to him, if they fill the roles that he was deprived of etc people who have been deprived of positive attention and care are logically focused mostly on that in their relationships. However, Snape is also an academically inclined individual he owns a ton of books, shows signs of genius even as a student, and if wars and bad choices did not interfere he could certainly become really distinguished in his field. In this sense, someone could argue that in order for him to stay in a relationship he would need somebody to challenge and stimulate him mentally as well. Somebody that he could admire. And you have depicted this perfectly in this chapter.

Another unexpected detour - loved this little prequel. It gives Rose and her overall story even more depth.

Oh this was lovely! Sexy and lovely at the same time. You manage to make their connection and interactions so endearing. You are great at writing intimacy by the way - hopefully you write more of this :)

Another lovely piece.

Awesome one shot! Thanks for continuing their story

I have so enjoyed all your one shots and getting to spend more time with the great family you gave Snape! Always enjoy the interactions between your Snape and Harry and Snape dealing with all the fallout of the past with Rose by his side! Cracked up that Rose didn’t even have any wine, so she wouldn’t have to leave his side to go to the bathroom! No wine is serious love and devotion, lol!

Lovely chapter! I didn’t expect you to develop the story of how the Lupins and Rose met. But I’m glad you did! This was absolutely delightful! I also loved the detail about how Rose contemplates her role as a friend to her husband. This is quite interesting since life partners are supposed to be both lovers and friends at some point. So yes, thank you for this !

I really loved this story although I did feel their relationship resolved a little too quickly but I like that you didn’t stop there even though you could have. I’m really enjoying these extra chapters you’ve been adding. I hope you continue writing them

I am so loving your story!

Fantastic story with an amazing finish. This has to be the best fanfic I have ever read. I'm now excited to read the one-shots. You created an alternate ending that also had an incredible tie to the books. I felt like I was reading a continuation of the HP story. WELL WELL done. Please keep writing!