You managed to get me to tear up in some parts of this, ahhhhh. Poor Héctor. He honestly deserved better. That was a really nice ending to his first Día de los Muertos, having him tell his tale and bringing good humor and music into the night for him. I’m curious about where this will go :)

Hector met some smart people. Of course, they misidentified Ernesto's motives but who can blame those who didn't know Imelda for that?

Wow, amazing start! Love this and love your writing style, especially how you write Héctor! I can tell there's a lot of angst coming and, in case you continue this, can't wait to suffer. Hope to see more of this story and more of you soon. Good luck with your writing!

Please CONTIUE! Story I like Hector. His my favorite so's CoCo and Imelda.

Aww I hate to see him in pain :(
I hope he find some friends soon.

This is an interesting start so far.

I always thought of Hector as an orphan growing up, but it's not the only time where he hasn't heard from them since he wanted to be a musician.