I think that this chapter Is great and I wasn't expecting the ending of this chapter.

I think that this chapter Is great and I like that Cinder Is evolving.

I think that this chapter Is amazing.

I think that this chapter Is great.

I like this chapter and was It Ozpin who was In the picture Salem has.

I think that this chapter Is great and Is Cinder more powerful than Lucy.

I like this chapter.

I like this chapter and I like that we will know Cinder's backstory.

I like this chapter and this story seems Interesting.

Not bad but I really want more

Really cute chapter. In my theory, instead, Grimm were once just animals with Aura, but since the god of darkness(i don't remind if i already tell you this) was unable to create on his own, he corrupted them. Unable to reproduce, their rests form the pools in Salem's domain and with her defeat, not thath i consider Oz truly better than her, they will return normal animals, as much powerful, and will be a source of food and materials for Huntsman and work, aniway.

Been a long time since I had to say this, but Remnant doesn't use dollars...

It doesn't happen so much, but nice chapter, see you soon.

Perhaps you should have removed the author's note at the start, seeing as how the split made it pointless?

Not bad at all