I should get the good part out of the way first.
The chapter was enjoyable and the kiss between Harry and Hermione was cute, and the suspense was also very well written.
Now the bad.
The timeskip has pretty much killed anymore intrest in the story and honestly I should have seen it coming with the two year timeskip to get them to eleven dispite all the wasted potential with Nymphadora. I was honestly hoping to see how you'd handled them not being in Hogwarts especially with the elf magic enhancing them (seriously what's the point of doing that if you're going to basically cut out any adventure?), I guess that was to difficult or something. Might read the rest later if I remember to.

I just realize without Harry being in Hogwarts he might have just doomed a bunch of kids to their death lol. He was key in stopping several important events, I'm curious if there's going to be a butterfly effect.

That was a very interesting choice, I'm a bit sad since I was curious on how Harry would maneuver his way in the school. Was also hoping to see him and Hermione in Ravenclaw lol. Still this is a good chapter and I enjoyed reading this.

Thank you for this chapter, I'm hoping to see more interactions between Harry and Sirius. I've sadly only seen the movies and Harry all but ignored Sirius... his last real family. I'm hoping it's different here.

Ok all I can really say is, LMAO.

This was interesting and I really like how you handle this ritual. I am sad that it looks like Harry and Hermione are going to become Gryffindors (if they go to Hogwarts), but what can you do.

I get that Harry's still just a kid and that kids tend to make rash decisions and since he's not in a abusive home he's quite a bit bolder, however him having one of his house elves pour her magic into Hermione was a terrible idea and didn't make complete sense to me. Harry has been warned that they don't know what effect it could have on a Wizard/Witch's magic and he just basically put Hermione in danger, plus he's far more aware of the Magical World of Britain so he should also be aware just how much danger she is in since she's not part of a pureblood family and so she... lacks certain protections.
I'm really hoping this doesn't become common, giving others elf magic would kill one of the things that makes this story interesting.

Thoroughly enjoyed the chapter and I am eagerly anticipating the next one

These huge time jumps are a bit disconcerting. we were just being sad with Nym that they weren't being sorted with the firsties and now Hermionie is 15 and getting kissed . It would be nice if you put a date above the beginning of the chapter or "4 years later" or something. Otherwise I am still enjoying the story very much! I was waiting to see what happened that year with Dobby and all though, so the time skip was that much worse.

okay it's been a while. I backed up a bit before reading the new updates and I am still loving the story. I am confused about Nymphadora being so young.

I can't help but think the "no elf magic during a task" is going to bite Nym and/or Harry soon enough.

I am really enjoying this. Thank you.

Beautiful! Extremely beautiful!

Love it!

love this

:-)