Damn, Sasori sucks but Ireally like this and is it bad I kinda what a villain gaara?

Heh, this looks really good. I like this.

This is the second point that contradicts canon rather severely

One: Gaara's sand is a bloodline from his mother; there was a rather dramatic reveal about that actually

Two: Shukaku only ever got loose because Gaara let it, practically forced it; never had it actually been capable of taking over. This point is an immediate concern because it means that Shukaku could get out at any point. You can argue that she is emotionally compromised, but she has enough mind to deny him, unlike whenever Gaara loses control due to literal momentary insanity. This opens up a can of worms that will likely become major plot holes down the line.

I thought the sand thing was a bloodline - ya know, like the father used gold sand and third kage used iron sand, etc - so using sand wouldn't actually matter much in regards to Shukaku?

she did have foreknowledge about gaara's fate right?
but that means she also knew about naruto's predicament.
so she could have atleast tried to have negotitiation with shukaku.
Btw great story. Hope you don't drop it

what... is the point of all of this?

I...don't know what to say . But now that Sasori has Gaara , then what would happen with Akatsuki? Welp! Keep the good work , i'm looking forward for your next chap!

Thanks you so much for writing this! And wow, it's getting worse and worse for gaara and tsuna. Quite realistic too. So again, Thank you! And good luck!

Nice writing. Feelin bad for Gaara. Totally thought he was gonna rape her for a moment. This was worse, I think, for her. She's gonna need some of Naruto's Therapy Jutsu.

Because of course, Rabbit is just so cute, who wouldn't pet them? I have to admit that was a really, really good buildup/resolution there. It's often interesting to see something from the outside in these kinds of stories and I think you've captured a reasonable view of the mindset of the ANBU here. They're elite, trained killers... who are (reasonably) scared to death of what has just been put in their laps. In their barracks, in their home.

Where is the drama, hurt and angst in the genres of this story? Adventure and Friendship? Really? Completely innacurate. You wanted my time for this. Next time you write a story put the genres that you actually USE in the story. What a waste of time.
Not a bad story, but it's not of my personal liking. The genres hinted to another type of story, more cute-like with the friendship and the adventure, not this shitstorm of angst and drama.

Funny. Nanashi basically means nameless.

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I know that Rasa wasn't the best father, but I truly hope he feels guilty once he finds out Gaara was kidnaped. Not to mention that he will try his best to keep Gaara's disappearance a secret from other villages. Nanashi reminds me of Orochimaru, maybe this is why, in this fic, Sasori is angry with Orochimaru. Maybe, Orochimaru takes advantage of the situation and screws over Gaara and Sasori in some way. Btw good chapter.

Oh mah gawd! Can’t wait to find out what happens next. I hope she gets rescued cause returning to the village is better than staying there’s in my opinion. I wondered if she gonna get a puppet hand or something, or will her hand somehow magically grow back?