love it please write more

Um. I can kinda get Oliver getting special privileges on after-death action, given all his heroic-ness and the stuff the Beyonder mentioned. Laurel... is a bit more difficult, but she did go through some similar stuff. Tommy being there just doesn't make sense. He certainly didn't befriend anybody with the speedforce or magic and such.

Isn't it still Starling City at this point? Maybe a bit rushed with that intro. I think the line about the info-dump was what made it a bit too obvious. Probably would have worked better if the Beyonder mentioned it last chapter, or if we had a sort of mini-flashback internal monologue thing of Oliver experiencing those memories, rather than just telling us he knows everything. I know it had to happen, but it took me out of the story a bit.

The bit with Laurel is pretty adorable. I think you rushed it, though. Slow things down! Describe the moment. Don't rush the reveal. Have some nice character stares where they notice the little details and make them wonder if the other person is something special before you tell us :)

I like how you used Arrow's intro for Oliver's speech, it makes it sound good. I'm in chapter 43 and I love your Fan Fiction. It brings so many déjà vus now that Arrow is over. I hope you continue writing!

i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i am happy that Oliver & Laurel are Married & i am happy that Oliver & Laurel have a Beautiful Daughter

The philosophical reasoning for the need for Crossfranchise-Intercompany crossovers (httpsen. wiki/Intercompany_crossover, httpsen. wiki/Category:Intercompany_crossovers, wiki/Intercompany_Crossovers, wiki/Category:Intercompany_Crossovers, wiki/Category:DC_Marvel_Crossovers, profile/rubicon/lists/marvel-intercompany-crossovers/56517/, wiki/The_Doctor_(Earth-5556), and wiki/Category:The_Doctor_(Earth-5556)/Appearances) to become considered official canon. Is because of this particular historical philosophy( series/ancient-civilizations?season1, and Tree-of-Life/dp/B07752ZMS1). Which in fact is the philosophical historical ancestor for the Catholic Church's transition/change from Saturday observance to Sunday observance sure there was the Zoroastrianism influence upon Christianity and the Roman empire but come on with out the influence of Marcianism(httpsen. wiki/Marcionism), and Gnostic Dualism(httpsen. wiki/Gnosticism, watch?vfDMhIkKY7vA, watch?vb5W1SLyswp0, and watch?va0SwQHpVtoE). But to tell you the truth without the storline idea of a Omniverse( search?qTheOmniverse:TransdimensionalIntelligence,TimeTravel,theAfterlife,andtheSecretColonyonMarsBookbyAlfredLambremontWebre&stickH4sIAAAAAAAAAONgecTozS3w8sc9YSmnSWtOXmO04eIKzsgvd80rySypFNLjYoOyVLgEpXj10_UNDZONiytM4yviNRik-LlQhXgAygDL51AAAAA&saX&ved2ahUKEwiwmae5grTeAhXn3YMKHW6hDtYQ3LoBMAB6BAgKEAI&biw533.3333333333334&bih800&dpr1.5, wiki/Omniverse, wiki/Hypertime, wiki/Omniverse, and wiki/The_Glory) these philosophies influence upon the Entertainment Industry will ultimately become nulled. Include the Doctor, Time Lords, and theoretical Historical What Ifs in this story(possible time travel related cosmic/universe/multiverse creation microevolution to macroevolution evolutionary process side effects of time travel( What-Ifs-American-History-Historians/dp/0425198189, and search?eiXJTkW7HWH4vcjwSehb-YBA&insfalse&qhistoricalwhatifhistorybooks&oqhistoricalwhatifhistorybooks&gs_lmobile-gws-wiz-serp.3..33i299.13796.17713..18154...1.0..0.706.2445.0j4j3j1j6-1...0...1... 3eAEmyMU.) The disappearance barry allen is going to relate to the war of crisis of infinite earths within the traditional dc comics 52 Earth multiverse and that is with the marvel comics sequel to that series (even if most dc comics fans traditionally don't consider it canon) as result of barry allen trying to save his dc comics multiverse within the dc comics megaverse/hypertime within the dc comics incarnation of the Omniverse/hypertime. He actually ran so fast that he breached the multiversal barrier of his multiverse and accidentally entered a Marvel universe within a Marvel multiverse within the Marvel megaverse possibly within the Marvel Incarnation of the Omniverse. And so as result of the jigantic wamy traumatic experience Barry Allen both got as far can tell originally long term identity amnesia(both real life barry allen identity amnesia and flash related secret identity amnesia) so result when asked for his identity/name he misspelled/missidentified his name barry allen as result he ended up creating a new secret identity to replace the secret identity called the flash which as I had already informed you that amnesia stole from him( wiki/Buried_Alien_(Earth-TRN242), and articles/barry-allens-secret-run-marvel). Oh yeah since you are already are using the Marvel character Beyonder to do the dc comics hypertime/American Marvel Comics Omniverse/(Doctor Who/ UK Marvel Comics Omniverse) purpose of breaking the DC comics traditional strict 52 Earth Multiverse Storyline. You may as well rewatch the End of the episode 1 of the Fifth season of the Flash where Wally West meets up with Team Flash that Legends and the Time Bureau have either already started to create a theory or still have yet to create a theory within the DC Legends of Tomorrow current season storyline that certain events in history/time are easily/safely mallible/changeable while other events in history/time are fixed/cemented to the point that changes in time would of course result in disastrous side effects(this idea was borrowed from modern doctor who rather than the original set of episodes of the classic Doctor Who although even through the following seasons of classic Doctor Who the franchise has gradually transitioned to this newer concept.) Plus with Barry Allen's question of Eubard Thawne always presumably/assumptionally coming back from his future time period in order to Barry Allen's present time period in the time line in order to cause barry allen's dissappearance. For arguments sake in explanation of why the future news paper always despite how many times barry allen attempts to prevent it says that he disappears in a number of different time periods with in his own future if I remember correctly so we can explain it with another time travel concept that both classic Doctor Who and Modern Doctor Who have been gradually developing (just as a cause leads to an effect i

The philosophical reasoning for the need for Crossfranchise-Intercompany crossovers (httpsen. wiki/Intercompany_crossover, httpsen. wiki/Category:Intercompany_crossovers, wiki/Intercompany_Crossovers, wiki/Category:Intercompany_Crossovers, wiki/Category:DC_Marvel_Crossovers, profile/rubicon/lists/marvel-intercompany-crossovers/56517/, wiki/The_Doctor_(Earth-5556), and wiki/Category:The_Doctor_(Earth-5556)/Appearances) to become considered official canon. Is because of this particular historical philosophy( series/ancient-civilizations?season1, and Tree-of-Life/dp/B07752ZMS1). Which in fact is the philosophical historical ancestor for the Catholic Church's transition/change from Saturday observance to Sunday observance sure there was the Zoroastrianism influence upon Christianity and the Roman empire but come on with out the influence of Marcianism(httpsen. wiki/Marcionism), and Gnostic Dualism(httpsen. wiki/Gnosticism, watch?vfDMhIkKY7vA, watch?vb5W1SLyswp0, and watch?va0SwQHpVtoE). But to tell you the truth without the storline idea of a Omniverse( search?qTheOmniverse:TransdimensionalIntelligence,TimeTravel,theAfterlife,andtheSecretColonyonMarsBookbyAlfredLambremontWebre&stickH4sIAAAAAAAAAONgecTozS3w8sc9YSmnSWtOXmO04eIKzsgvd80rySypFNLjYoOyVLgEpXj10_UNDZONiytM4yviNRik-LlQhXgAygDL51AAAAA&saX&ved2ahUKEwiwmae5grTeAhXn3YMKHW6hDtYQ3LoBMAB6BAgKEAI&biw533.3333333333334&bih800&dpr1.5, wiki/Omniverse, wiki/Hypertime, wiki/Omniverse, and wiki/The_Glory) these philosophies influence upon the Entertainment Industry will ultimately become nulled. Include the Doctor, Time Lords, and theoretical Historical What Ifs in this story(possible time travel related cosmic/universe/multiverse creation microevolution to macroevolution evolutionary process side effects of time travel( What-Ifs-American-History-Historians/dp/0425198189, and search?eiXJTkW7HWH4vcjwSehb-YBA&insfalse&qhistoricalwhatifhistorybooks&oqhistoricalwhatifhistorybooks&gs_lmobile-gws-wiz-serp.3..33i299.13796.17713..18154...1.0..0.706.2445.0j4j3j1j6-1...0...1... 3eAEmyMU.) The disappearance barry allen is going to relate to the war of crisis of infinite earths within the traditional dc comics 52 Earth multiverse and that is with the marvel comics sequel to that series (even if most dc comics fans traditionally don't consider it canon) as result of barry allen trying to save his dc comics multiverse within the dc comics megaverse/hypertime within the dc comics incarnation of the Omniverse/hypertime. He actually ran so fast that he breached the multiversal barrier of his multiverse and accidentally entered a Marvel universe within a Marvel multiverse within the Marvel megaverse possibly within the Marvel Incarnation of the Omniverse. And so as result of the jigantic wamy traumatic experience Barry Allen both got as far can tell originally long term identity amnesia(both real life barry allen identity amnesia and flash related secret identity amnesia) so result when asked for his identity/name he misspelled/missidentified his name barry allen as result he ended up creating a new secret identity to replace the secret identity called the flash which as I had already informed you that amnesia stole from him( wiki/Buried_Alien_(Earth-TRN242), and articles/barry-allens-secret-run-marvel). Oh yeah since you are already are using the Marvel character Beyonder to do the dc comics hypertime/American Marvel Comics Omniverse/(Doctor Who/ UK Marvel Comics Omniverse) purpose of breaking the DC comics traditional strict 52 Earth Multiverse Storyline. You may as well rewatch the End of the episode 1 of the Fifth season of the Flash where Wally West meets up with Team Flash that Legends and the Time Bureau have either already started to create a theory or still have yet to create a theory within the DC Legends of Tomorrow current season storyline that certain events in history/time are easily/safely mallible/changeable while other events in history/time are fixed/cemented to the point that changes in time would of course result in disastrous side effects(this idea was borrowed from modern doctor who rather than the original set of episodes of the classic Doctor Who although even through the following seasons of classic Doctor Who the franchise has gradually transitioned to this newer concept.) Plus with Barry Allen's question of Eubard Thawne always presumably/assumptionally coming back from his future time period in order to Barry Allen's present time period in the time line in order to cause barry allen's dissappearance. For arguments sake in explanation of why the future news paper always despite how many times barry allen attempts to prevent it says that he disappears in a number of different time periods with in his own future if I remember correctly so we can explain it with another time travel concept that both classic Doctor Who and Modern Doctor Who have been gradually developing (just as a cause leads to an effect i

Great rewrite on arrow. Really great story

Liar, liar, pants on fire. (RE: AN)

It's been one of hell of a ride, for you, for me and every fan out there who had the pleasure reading this story, when there's a problem with the TV Shows, we'll turned to you for help. This story has been satisfying and redeeming.

Thank you.

Shoulda bloody reviewed on this sooner, Percabeth, cos I so loved these last few chapters, the scenes with our lovely golden couple, and the girl's day out, were the most touching and sweet, the wedding, as with all the other versions you've done before, crowned it perfectly to a tee. Huge well done on this whole story all this way

I loved the ending

This was a great story! I can't wait for your next story in the Arrowverse.

Loved it.

That was a good story.